Favulous!
I loved it! :)

Cheers
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What a deliciously whumpy fic! *iz a proud whumper* Ya whumped John and Ronon but good and the angst for Carson and Rodney was spot on. I confess I lmfao at some of your descriptions (i.e. the haggistribble and the spider pig/muppet tarantula) which was freaking brill by the way. Well done! Cheers! }:O

Raven

Eeew, that was way beyong disturbing, but in a good way... Thank you!

Poor John, he seems a little crazy in the head now you've finished with him :)

I'm glad he's back, however. As cute as Spider-Pig-John was, you're right. You can't beat 100% John Sheppard *yay*

Should I ask what torment you'll be putting him through next? *gulp*

Jeez, so I finally got my phone to let me log in so I could read and review! Late, or what?

Is it wrong that I find Spider-Shep just as cute as human-Shep? And to think spidery things scare the living crap outta me...hmmm!

Very interesting, off to the next chapter! :)

My goodness that was a dark story. You certainly put John put through hell and back. The thought of John as a spider gives me the creeps, but even in that form he was still the hero. Thanks for writing it.

Oooh. Very suitably disturbing for the occasion. Nice surreal feel to Sheppard's experience and the dreams. Love it that he even found a little team that watched over him as a spider, albeit a furry one.

Holy...what the hell? Aagghh, must. Read. More!

Seriously-were you on painkillers when you wrote this! LOL! Had to reread the last chapters and still wasnt quite sure what happened!LOL! Guess I was trying to make too much sense of your shepwhumping story! Disssstuurrrbbing!

I enjoyed this, very different. It's always interesting to consider what it is to be human.

Yay! John's back - physically if not quite mentally yet. That's quite the experience to come to terms with, though. Not surprised he's still feeling the effects!

Thanks for that scary trip into the depths of your weird and wonderful imagination. It was a really original idea.

And a Happy Halloween to you too! I'm celebrating by eating all the sweets we buy just in case we get callers. But we live in such a quiet area we never get any! Shame - lol!

Wow your fic had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish. I kept wondering what you were going to do to John and what I thought you might do was a complete 360 from it.

I did get creeped out at the thought of John as a huge mutant spider though and may never look at them the same way ever again.

Can't wait for your next fic so keep up all the great whmpage to John.

Happy Halloween - and what do I give you for your fabulous treat of a story - a massive thanks!

Loved the whole thing and the way you used the rag doll idea - wish they'd done that in the seed!

Also loved the nightmare senario's and the way Teyla saved him...a bit of sheyla is never a bad thing.

Thanks again for a really fab story!

...oops, posted before finished!

As I was saying, I hope he gets his normal form back in the last chapter! This has been some Hallowe'en adventure - looking forward to how you wrap it up. Thanks for this dark atmospheric tale.

Boy, when you write whump, you don't pull any punches ma'am. I love Sheppard in any form, but prefer when he stays human! Is he going to find his real form in the next cha