Two words... Holy sh*t! That was beyond awesome! Sorry for the language, but this is the first songfic (or fanfic, even) that's ever brought out that reaction in me.

I mean, the story, disheartening though it was, fit the song to a T. I bow and scrape at your feet, oh mighty fanfic master.

And now, I must put in eyedrops. I didn't get to blink when I read this...

... 8O

AP (that's you!): So...you liked it? o.o

PP: Liked it. Liked it? LIKED it? You think I LIKED it? T.T

AP: *bows head in shame*

PP: ...I LOVED IT! :D :D :D

AP: *falls over anime-style*

Okay, so this was AMAZING. :O It was scarily real and descriptive, and I can definitely see it happening. The entire thing was intense, and it's daring of you to post something like this; not many people would, so kudos to you! :D Once again, you portray emotions well; their anger, hurt, and betrayal really got to me, and the thing about this fic is that some couples ARE like this.I don't understand why she wouldn't leave him (well, except for the fact that he's INUYASHA, and I wouldn't even leave HIM if he was like this to me XD), but I can believe that she would stay instead of leave, if that makes sense. o.o I've never listened to the song before, so I wouldn't know what you based off of it ('cause I don't read the lyrics in songfics -.-'), but I think this abusive relationship was awesomely displayed, and the writing had me guessing what would happen next, and it made me feel for them. D: This was honestly so good (let's face it: all dark fanfictions are XD), I wouldn't mind reading more of this from you, if it ever comes. :O Great job, and this is DEFINITELY being favorited! .

This story left a bad taste in my mouth, in a good way. I'm sure that's what you were trying to convey in your writing. I wanted to shake some sense into Kagome and beat Inuyasha for her. Tsk, tsk, I do pity the way abused women begin to think after manifesting themselves in their abusive relationship. I enjoyed reading this oneshot, but now I think I'm gonna go try to find a fluff-filled story to rinse out the bad taste in my mouth. (; So, kudos to you for conveying the abusiveness so well.

I can say that, while i'm really getting tired of reading one-shots based off of that song, this is the best one I have read.

mew...

This is so sad :( I don't like it because it's just so sad lolol. but I guess when i'm in an angsty mode i'll read this again!

I LOVED IT...

ENOUGH SAID.

Reminds me of me and my boyfriends relationship only he's not stupid enough to hit me! Great One-Shot