I'm glad you feel that way now, but I have to say, the movie was terrible. Though that wasn't the actors fault. Your story's great btw.

It's really cool for you to apologize for your mistakes but the movie was worse that falling into Tartarus ok incorrect it is probably about the same. I have to say I have been sort of against the percabeth having kids thing but I love the way you wrote it in your stories! Please keep writing! And if you intend to stop writing well... hades curse your life and death!

Awwww, so sweet!

It's alright at least you were brave enough to admit being in the wrong. Love the story BTW!

This is a very beautiful story! And don't worry about anything that anonymous reviewer said, because who cares about their opinion, really? What's one person in comparison to hundreds of people that love your work? (Really, I am not joking.) So yeah, have a nice day!

Uh you shouldn't be concerned about the shit some guest with a stick in the ass wrote. Grover is BLACK in the movies and it IS inadequacy to the books! Heck, half of this movie is simply wrecked! The actors and film makers would have been no one without the watchers so our voice counts and this voice requires criticism as well. Maybe that idiotic bimbo doesn't know 'what's wrong with you' but I know what is wrong with him/her - it's either a troll or a moron.

nice oneshot

You are so racist. I HATE YOU. Who cares if Grover is black in the movie? And it ain't nice to call Africans very, very tan. What the heck is wrong with you, you jerk? And your username doesn't make sense either! What are you Chinese? Get a life, instead of writing weird and stupid stories (half of them don't even make any sense!) And then you leave all these stories uncompleted! What the hell is wring with you? Get a life! I am never, ever, ever reading any of your stories again!

Wow. The last part made me laugh super hard.!(:

No you should watch the movie I saw it before reading the books and now when I picture Annabeth it kinda of flickers. She is too pretty! I don't know but I'va always pictured him like that and actually I think he was describe as "Coloured" in the first book.

Love the story.

Forever a fan

-3rd Bookworm.

I loved this story, very well written and very cute. I laughed when Percy was seven years old.

As for your A/N at the end I agree with you on Logan Lerman- he is a sexy beast. As for Alexandria Daddario she is pretty (in her own way) I'm jealous of her hair. But even though she didn't fit the profile of the Annabeth of the book, she did a pretty good job in the movie. And Brandon T. Jackson was awesome as Grover (very funny :D). It was a pleasent surprise to see him as a black person.

Oh, and the movie by itself was really good. Its only when you compare it to the book that it's bad.

Okay I've read several of your stories now and I think you are damn good writer. just needed to say that.

This was cute, I loved it!

I loved this story! But why does everybody hate Alexandra daddario? Is it because she isn't blonde like Annabeth?

rick riordan never said grover waas white in the book and he never said he was black either so it really doesnt matter 2 much. And alexandria daddari actually black the role of annabeth pretty good even if she is a brunette with blue eyes. If someone writes a book and another person makes a movie about that book, the movie will NEVER be exactly the same as the book. Sorry 4 the long review. Just trying 2 get my point across. By the way, nice story.