Wonderfulness.

Gorgeous story

Beautifully written, well done!

Aww..that was effing SWEET with sugar on top! _

This story is amazing :DDDDDDD

That was AWESOME! You know who would love your analogy? Max. XD

Awwww! I squeeled at this cuteness! I love this story. You should write more Jalex fanfics, you're a talented writer!

I checked your profile and it says you ship Mason-Alex, so I'm surprised that you wrote a jalex. O.o

Anyways, I loved this fic. You got the characters so well! "because that's what responsible older brothers do, and if he isn't the epitome of responsible, then sliced bread isn't that amazing." Nice analogy, and nice use of it afterwards ;)

My fav parts: "He lies beside her, panting heavily from his /nearest-to-near-death experience/, eyes wide." LOL

"Justin Russo is an extremely manly man, and books shouldn't be judged by their squeaks… according to him, anyway."

"his glass of water, for possible emergencies in which he might get dehydrated in sleep with no time to run downstairs to avoid a painful, waterless death". LMAO that is SOOO Justin- over-panicking for everything! :P

I have never seen anyone pronounce lingerie properly. Heck, I probably can't pronounce it myself :p

"How do you know 'si' isn't actually short for 'yesito'?"

""Stop abusing me, Alex."" Abusing. LOL. Nice choice of words XD

"What in the name of the periodic table of elements were you thinking?" Chemistry :/ In the name of Un-nil-heptium, that was awesome! XD

I like the way you used "oh". so simple, sweet and affective! I liked the part where she is upset after break off with Mason and Justin comforts her. I like the Harper's wedding dress part.

The ending was AWESOME, dude. PERFECT.

Gandhi reference, huh? I live in India, so that's what made me look at your profile. :D

Yes I'm a rambler sometimes, but well, If I don't ramble, then sliced bread isn't really that amazing XD

I loved the sliced bread thing! haha! This was reallyy good! Great job with it! )

pretty good sista xD