Hello. Discovered this story after seeing it mentioned in a thread on Tumblr. Pretty cool backstory you had going for a relatively small NPC. It would be cool to see you come back to it sometime, though it being over 5 years since the last update, it might be difficult. Still hoping it could happen. If not, well, thanks for creating these first few chapters; they were nice.

Tell me there's more! I love this one. I love the way you wrote Gavorn and your backstory is amazing.

I can't believe I didn't stumble upon this earlier. I absolutely, unreservedly love what you've written so far! You succeeded in appropriating a very marginal character and elaborating a rich backstory for him; you really ground this guy, despite having so little to work off of. Looking forward to how this story unfolds.

And just for record: there aren't nearly enough gay turians out there, so in that regard, too, kudos.

(Was tickled by the "Fleet & Flotilla" nod!)

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeerereeeeeeeeee eeesaaaaaaasssssseeee!

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This needs more reviews. I love it.

The backstory is perfect and I love how you define each character. I adored Dreams of Illium by the way, I actually stumbled across this fic while trying to find a link for it.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Ok first of all. I had no idea you were the one who wrote "Dreams of Illium". I loved that fill!

Second of all. I'm loving this continuation. Looking forward to read more :)

It seems you're branching out. Glad to see it. There's a lot of ground covered in this chapter and I am pleased to see so much variety in content. Also, I am beginning to see a more coherent plot develop. There are many directions you could take this and am eager to see what you come up with. Bonus points for consistency. Not only is your style of writing easy to digest, you go out of your way to stay true to the source material.

Overall, excellent work.

So glad you updated 3

What a way to come home lol but as i said on archive site.. i feel smart 8D

Can't wait for the next one though, good to know that you expect a faster next chapter hehe, i re-read this story's 3 chapters at least 6 times so haha

omg i found you on here, tehe

hope for an update still~

I stumbled across this story after I had played 'Lair of the Shadow Broker' and noticed a story you titled 'Dreams of Illium' (which I chose to read first), the story to which I enjoyed throughly.

So to be able to read another story by you about Gavorn was a true treat. Again I felt drawn into the story and feel that you have successfully turned such an undeveloped character (game wise) into a truly fascinating one.

I truly would love to see this story continue, you are doing a brilliant job writing Gavorn.

Ahh. Preitor Gavorn. One of my favorite side characters in ME2.

Stumbled across this story by accident, but I was quite impressed. You were able to squeeze so much out of someone we know so little about and kept me immersed all the while. That's commendable, to say the least.

Yes, the atmosphere is dripping with angst and hostility. However, I would not have it any other way. Sterilized, wholly implausible fantasies are bland and difficult to relate to. Please continue!

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You're the author of "Dreams of Illium" as well? *stretches his collar* That earns you a well deserved spot on my favorites list!

So I was too excited about reading this next chapter I busted out my BlackBerry and started reading!

All I can say is that my excitement was fulfilled in the utmost of manners! What a supurb read, Gavorn is character that really caught my attention

And not because he happened to be gay, but because he was so undertold and fleshed out. You've done a wonderful jobs filling in the gaps and this makes

Me want a third chapter ASAP! Keep up the wonderful writing!

(Sorry if the spacing in this review is off, it was done on a Blackberry)

I think this chapter came out great! It's really interesting to see events that helped shape Preitor into the turian he is when the story started.

I can't wait to see where you're going with this