This is the most ridiculous plot ever holy shit it's garbage like it's still my village lmaoooo wtf they betrayed him treeated him like shit killed he's mother and he's being a nice guy fuck outta here utter garbage should of destroyed konoha before leaving world

I'm so fkin confused this shits all over the place

Type your review fic involving gods

God damn it this chapter hit me right in the feels! Kurama the realest bro any one could have, especially Naruto. Naruto schooling these Ninja’s. I wonder how Kurama will work everything out on his end, after taking his bros place. Now for that break out with the G-Children.

Now that prologue was sad. But can’t wait for Naruto to go to the AG universe. And Takeshi thought Naruto the best Jutsu ever. It causes humiliation and pain at the same time.

Great story. Keep up the good work and please don't let your stories fade out like other writers have.

great story its a shame after so long w/o being updated its unlikely to be resumed one of those stories you want to see finished

okay, I know this is likely an exercise in futility given when this was last updated, but I felt I should point out some things. first, Rika is NOT a gravity child. she was born 100% human. she later became a Brain Charger due to Sora brain washing her. Ikki... well all we have with him is speculation. it is suspected that he might be a gravity child, but there is no proof one way or the other. he could also be human, but as before there is no way to know for certain.

just needed to vent a bit. I don't expect a response. but I wouldn't mind one, or an update to this.

Not Justus? Well thanks for wasting hours of my time for nothing...not.

i hope you die torturedvand raped to death you worthless microbe

Anytime I see "Sasuke-Teme" or anything similar to that, I feel like I'm going to start foaming at the mouth and have a seizure. Teme doesn't mean bastard, if that's what you're going for, in fact I'm certain it doesn't mean anything close to whatever you're thinking. It essentially means "you". Even then, that's not entirely true, as it's an aggressive form of addressing somebody, and can only be used when talking to that person specifically. Theme is not to be used as an honorific, otherwise it's legitimately nonsense, and anyone speaking japanese would look at you strangely. So please bear that in mind, and if you could, send out a memo or something, because people really need to grasp this concept. Otherwise, good work.

Interesting start to the story. I don't really have a problem with the POV as long as it is well written and doesn't switch around a lot. Can't wait to read more of this story.

A1 is all important. A1 is not just a steak sauce, but a meat and other various things sauce! It is definitely the Sauce of the gods.

it took over three chapters for what seems like a prologue

update again bro?