that is just incredible. My hat is off for you.

o3o Plz update soon! I LOVE this story! It is so AWESOME!

I've died and went to heaven! BEST. STORY. EVER!

baby mattt has 2 of the most sexxy & badass ppl for uncles...

he's going to be soooo kickass when he's older

This was amazing! Definitely one of my favorites. Great plot, and I loved how it as fast, but not too fast. Very good!

I love this story more than I should.

So sorry I only reviewed the last chapter just as you specifically asked the readers not to, but I'm in my iPod, it's five AM, and I was do enraptured by this story there was no option to stop XDD I was terrified I would fall asleep trying to review each chapter and not be able to get to the end.

In any case I adored this story; not at all what I expected at first but I liked it alot :) really creative plotbunny as well as great portrayal of Matt and Mello good job. I liked the OC too. Altogether exellent story.

This is GOOD! i just read it all and i thoroughly enjoyed this!

Wow...when I first saw this story I had half a mind to not read it. But I'm glad I went: Ah, what the heck, and read it. I really loved this story to. It wasn't overly-detailed, which I like, and you had really good references from the anime/manga in it. I really enjoyed this story and believe it or not, you've inspired me. Though I'll have to write the story you gave me an idea for after I complete the one I'm brainstorming. The only question I have is this: When Catrina first meets Mello in that hallway,is the other, smaller Infected Near? I was curious being that we know what happened to 2 out of 3 Whammy Boys. Other then that small question I understood everything clearly, and I can't wait to see more from you :D

-Wishes

0_0 Tis epoch and sweet...

I loved this, I guess I'd be safe from Mello since I just got my hair dyed red. _; The other infected however... o.O

Did I get a sense of Catrina/Markus, or was I just imagining things o.o?

But omgawwwwwwomg, REUNION! Baby Matt! This was so incredibly touching :3

Aww. *heart* See I would be ticked you're not updating Monster but I've come to realize if you write it I couldn't care so long as it's posted. XD I hope the medicine works but good luck finding another compliant infected... maybe if they made it a shot? Oh and good luck on those tests.

Ooh, awesome! I'm happy to be able to see her reaction. Now that her baby is born though, it would be nice to eventually see baby Matt when he gets older. But that's probably going to need some more bonus chapters beforehand, just so the future will already be set.

I might be a little sadistic but... I would like to see the cure not end up working. Either because it is just to risky to get normal infected to take or because it won't work on infected who didn't already have Mello's mental capabilities. Maybe it's because I'm still slightly dissatisfied with how they created the cure.

Perhaps instead of "he questioned, not for the first time, if anyone had tried to cure the infection" you could put something along the lines of "He had seen the work of a number of researchers who had developed possible cures for the infection, but they never were able to test it."

And maybe instead of finding an already existing medicine that happened to also cure the virus, Matt could combine their ingredients mad-scientist style. I don't doubt that Matt could find a cure, since he is a genius, but I think that it would be better if you mentioned him studying the makeup of the virus itself and actually creating the medicine. I think it would make the process more believable, and make Matt seem a lot smarter. -

This was just awesome.

Nuff said. :D

AAAAUUUUGGGGGGH! IM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY! I know I havent reviewed for the last few chapters, I assure they were as good as chapter 10 was, Ive been... well, let's start from the top. I'm autistic. that means my brain is naturally disfunctional. and you know what's really fun? a doctor who's son became autistic at nearly 10 months(it's a REALLY big change in personality for the child, trust me. it causes backsliding like crazy. kid says their first 15 words, gets it and suddenly doesn't speak at all till they are two...and potty training is bad too... either that or you get L and Near kids.) found some disturbing results to a few tests. Long story short, all autistic kids process cows milk and gluten...differently. and by differently I mean it turns into morphene/heroin/opium in their blood stream. these kids generally get attached to things like cereal(me), cheese sandwiches(my lil bro), chocolate(coughMellocough), and sweets that contain either/both(L anyone?). this can cause fluctuating performance... remember those first few reviews? for chapters 1-9? yeah, those. I was eating a normal diet(no censoring). without it, the kids become hyper sensitive(even if they have never had either. it's just the way we are) to things like flourescent lights flickering, loud noises(malls and the like are hell on earth...wall mart isn't fun either for that matter), can hear conversations from 50ft away(i speak from experience of 6 weeks cold turkey 6 months ago), and (when not bothered by withdrawalwhich can make us go catatonic get straight A's in what we are interested me and your story) and just generally act like L and Near. so, at about chapter 6 I decided you deserved the best review I could give( .10). so I didn't eat any milk or gluten for a few days(enough to clear my head, but before withdrawal seriously sets in), then on ch.10 I grabbed every last brain cell I could, read the chapter once, had those reactions, listed them on a piece of paper, then organized the review, re-wrote it twice, then sent it in... I got driven up the wall by my little brother shortly after that and went straight for the milk and cereal...thats why you havent gotten more like that, later, I'll be leaving proper reviews again on my skm account once I've been "clean" for a few days. I want to leave the best I can, so Ill probably be leaving them all on the same day within about 3 hours or so... sorry for the wait, It shouldn't be much longer now.

Much adoration,

qxq/skm