I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you come back eventually and finish your sequel to this story.

So I don't know if this has been mentioned but telekinetics is moving things with your mind that's it. Being telepathic is reading minds and stuff. A force user being telekinetic is a bit redundant lol. I mention this because you've used telekinetics in place of telepathic is several places

so far a pretty good story, but

Part of the problem with having a character that reads people’s minds all the time is that I find it hard to believe when in all Revan's interactions with his commando group that he never picked up on the fact that one was loyal to Malak, also he should have a fairly good idea which of his admirals are plotting against him.

ROFL at the end part

Well, this has certainly proven to be a most interesting read, sure, I've seen plenty of other fics of Bastila joining Revan, but yours is the first to actually go all the way to the Republic's defeat.

Oh my oh my, excellent, excellent twist, I knew The Exile had her reasons for being so hostile, and I've not been disappointed, it honestly doesn't surprise me to see Malak pull something like that.

While I'll admit I'm not too thrilled about it, I'm not going to quit on an interesting story over the fate of one character. xD

Hmm, I'm surprised at the Exile's stance towards Revan, though I suppose that's because I personally see her as one that would always stand with Revan, it'll be interesting to see how things go.

Ehhh I figured Malak would have something like that planned. He's no dumbass. However, I really thought Revan would have a contingency plan for that. KotOR makes it quite clear that Revan is WAYYYY smarter than Malak. The fact that Malak managed to do... Whatever he did... Suprises me.

Well, this is awkward. Had I been patient for just another chapter I would have seen the explanation.

Telekinesis is the ability to move things with your mind. Telepathy is the ability to read minds.

The humor makes sense to me. Look at all the wisecracks you were allowed to make in the game.

Finnally I'm so tired of these redmption fics and you my friend have made me a happy person

10/10

Revan probably intended to conquer the republic and merge the sith and jedi ways back to how the original Je'Daii were. Then get mandalorians to train the republic military instructors. Then pwn the crap out of the true sith.

Or just to stir up the republic followed by surrendering or something.