I love this story. It may be the most exciting fanfiction I've read! Pleas write more soon!

Her parents are probably going to freak!

Great story! Thanks for writing it!

Heh. You did a good job with the part where Peter was panicking. I wonder if Peter will have a growth spurt while at the Darlings...

I can't really form an opinion on this yet, but it shows promise. The Jeremy Sumpter Peter Pan is my favorite, so I'll definitely read more.

Peter's so cold sometimes. Great chapter!

I imagine that this is totally how Peter would react if this happened to him! I like how Peter's mindset is changing a bit. I read this some time ago. Still good.

Ohhhhh gosh...*sits in reverent silence for several moments, soaking up and taking in the story just read*
Where to begin?
Man... *flails hands uselessly, trying to remember how to word*
This was an amazing story. From beginning to end. And everything in between. Just... aughhhhhh... my heart, my poor, feels heavy heart. Your storyline/plot was superb, not at all cliche or flat. It kept me engaged the entire time! In addition, your writing style... asdfgjjfdsdfgh...*squeals incoherently*... the whole time I was reading this story I was utterly drawn into the world of Neverland and old London. At the same time though I was reading and the back of my mind was just "this writing style, I loves it, I needs it, I must learn how to does it, ahhhhh!" Your choice of words was fantastic. Also just your form. God. That form. You emphasize at the perfect places, the perfect words, the perfect situations. It's AMAZING. I also loved the way you would get into each of the character's heads (even Nana!) and portrayed them wonderfully. You weaved humor throughout the story with each characters thoughts (I was trying to smother my giggles several times). Also, the way you were able to write each of the boys and Wendy with such childlike innocence and yet... not innocence...was amazing. AUGHHHHHHHH... *feels overwhelm* you, my friend, are a fantastic writer.I hope you write much, much much more in your future. Thank you for blessing all of your readers with such eloquence and happiness. I've written a ton it feels but I still don't feel like I've been able to fully thank you and gush over this story. I've done my best through...I hope you understand. :] Please... Never stop writing.
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And now I'm going to check out your profile to see if you have any more wonderful tales to share! XD

Omygosh... I just had to take a second to tell you that this is too cute. I'm really enjoying reading this. :)

3 Cute, I'll miss it.

Aww! This was really good!

I've recently come into possession of the Peter Pan dvd, and after watching it again after so long I decided to look up some fanfiction. I decided to give this one a try and I'm glad I did! Your writing is really good and I enjoyed this highly.

Thank you for writing and posting this, it was a wonderful past time :)

I'll just say bye. Never good bye. Because if I say bye then it's not for forever. So yeah...bye, you amazing writer. I loved your story

You idiot! You choose immortality over something, no scratch that, SOMEONE you find only once in a lifetime?! No matter how long you live you might never love someone that much again

No! Don't leave! Stay! Please :(

PANIC ATTACK!