oh this was so cute!

The format of this story is slightly weird. The paragraphs are one sentences and your grammar is off slightly. The paragraphs should be more than a sentence, "beef" it up. I do like the idea of it...but it needs more for me to like it a lot more.

I've always hated this story line, its burned into my retinas but I like the way you wrote this. It is the only thing I've read on this story line that I like. Well done. And I love the good hearted bots that stepped forward. Thank you.

i loved this!