It is a really cute story perverted but cute and when is the next story come out ?

I feel sorry for Crona, but godamnit, I want to know more from the story! I want to see more of Kid's dark side XD

Ha! Perfect timing Liz! This was a nice chapter, though my sympathies for Crona are still very high. It's a shame that she didn't try going out a window...wait...never mind, there probably wasn't a window available. Ah well. This was a pretty great chapter. And now, I shall go wonder what Maka would do if she ever found out about what this pervy Shinigami is doing with Crona.

Kay, so that beginning was WAY creepy and the reveal that he's been stalking her is..fairly disturbing...to say the least; however, I do like how this is progressing. Nevertheless, poor Crona. She keeps getting herself into more and more trouble.

Hmm, but I do like how caring he's being towards her.

At least he's not some overly-aggressive psychopath like...well...like Gopher to be quite blunt. Let's just hope Crona manages to stay out of trouble for the remainder of the story. I'm kinda worried as to what a punishment would be, but seriously he should give her more freedom.

I'll let this be the conclusion for the review. I'm curious as to what happens next.

Oh...poor, poor Crona...hopefully she manages to find a way out of this.

Please update. I loveeeeeeeeee it.

oh Gawd xD
I really really like this story, kid is so different to his usual self, to his usual behavior, IT'S HIS DAMN PERVY-FETISHIST DARK SIDE!
continue it c'mon please! :33
it's so freaking awesome LOL mister wolf xD
please continue for the safe of humanity

OMG! I love this story! (A bit OOC for Kid, but then again... For all we know his dark side could be a crazy perv! XD) Please pease please continue! I wanna know what happens next! Pretty dark and sexy! I like the fact Kid admits hes keeping her with him because of his own selfishness. Btw, Crona's 'I don't know how to deal with _!' along with her virtue and innocence is a cute combo win! X3 I can not wait for an update! I really hope you finish this! (Crona:"Whut ish seckz? :" XD WIN! ADORIBLE WIN!)

PFFF I love Crona's dialogue. XDDD Why is Kid being such a perv? I love it. ;w; Goodness, Kid has a dark side. :o Intriguing.

It was a bit confusing who was talking at times and no real explanation to why Kid is acting that way and things are kinda all over the place, but keep writing to get better. :) It was kind of funny and creepily sexy.

Pls update!

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEE IM DIEING HEREEEEE PLEASEEE MAKE HIM PUNISH HER FINALLY! ahhhhhh

I like.

though Kid is kind of scary.

thanks for writing :)

LOL "what does fuck mean?"

:D i love this story! is it finished or are you planning to put more chapters cause i would love to see another chapter !

Where the fck is Ragnarok? He would totally fight!