I loved it. Tenten is awesome, no? Keep writing! )

That was great!

One of the best crack stories I've ever read. I was either laughing or melting into a puddle of goo at all points through it. Sad that it's finished now- his world really does need more GaaTen.

I think you're converting me to GaaTen- this stuff is amazing! I love it more with every chapter; this one was particularly adorable.

Squee! So cute and perfect :))

awww cute

i have to learn that special jutsu ;)

but are u sure u want to finish already?

Glorious fluff! I love your writing, and totally in love with the TentenGaara pairing right now.

You just turned GaaraxTenten into the best crack pairing ever. Congratulations. This story kept me checking the site for an update, and even got me to review. That's amazingness.

I wanna learn the rainbow-waterfall-sunset-sparkles no jutsu too!

Note: The following two lines should be read in all caps and an abundance of exclamation points, to properly connote the sheer flood of emotion invested in the spawning of said lines.

What? It's over already? Butbutbut- *blubbers* It was just getting to the good part! *sobcrywailgroansnifflemoan*

*ahem* But yes, it was a fantastic ending all the same. [Neji does want to the emit rainbows and sunsets and waterfalls. Sometimes. He's just afraid of the damage to his reputation.] I admit I may have fangirled [completelytotallyandmassively] at several points within the chapter. I don't think you need me to tell you which ones.

Again, I love how you kept all the characters, well, in character, and how you brought all of Gaara's insecurities to the forefront [where they really should be most of the time] and addressed them. Quite very much win, all through and all over.

I suppose this means you'll be starting another one soon-ish? Or finishing one soon-ish? Can't wait! *stalks more* :]

ah,that was so cute,i loved it!

I liked the part where Gaara is telling Kankuro to back off in his own Gaara way:formally yet intimidating :P

And you're definitly right about Neji and his refusal to use the rainbow no jutsu!

Love it. Neji frowned. I love how two words can means much. Great ending!

Great job this is an amazing story. I hope that u will write more tenten fics

Aaaawwwwwwwwwwwww...just-aaaaawwwwww.

That was so fluffy! And sweet! Too gooey for words. So gooey some just dripped on the floor and stuck to my shoe, dang. All they need to do now is go on a magic sand ride and sing 'A whole new world.'

Thanks for the fluuufffy story.

I feel lighter now.

K&K

"'No. I like you. You're cute.' It was getting easier, he thought as he repeated the spiel. He'd be getting babes in no time."

Oh man. I think I just mentioned that I love your characterization of Gaara. I do. I adore it. It deserves a second mention.

You know what I've noticed? You take fanfiction and writing cliches and rewrite them even better than the originals were. I.e. the high school AU. I.e. girl-spends-night-next-door-to-not-yet-love-interest. I.e. girl-teaches-antisocial-boy-about-dating (then-they-get-together-which-is-going-happen-right...?). Etc. etc.

It's not that I don't like cliches, really-they exist 'cause they're situations that people are interested in. They're just typically poorly, poorly, POORLY written. And you adding creativity to these is definitely a good thing. It's a fantastic thing, actually. Like, teaching your grandmothers how to knit properly, or somethin', or teaching Jiraiya how to perv. The right way. Okay, I'm done rambling.