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Oh. My. God. I've forgotten how brilliant you are! Thank you for all the feels! I keep coming back because you crack me up!

hahaha I could easily imagine this happening. And the last sentence hahaha

Haha, so fun

Oh por Dios, adoré este fanfic con toda mi alma!Perdona que escriba en español pero en inglés siento que no expreso toda mi felicidad, es que, ah, fue taaan hermoso!
Amo la relación de Gaara con Tenten, y el hecho de que pongan celoso a Neji le da mucho atractivo.
La nota final fue graciosísima,¡ jutsu arcoiris -cascada-puesta de sol es el jutsu del equipo Gai!
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Fisrts of all, can I just say that I LOVE how you present each character's thought process, reactions and interactions in a way that fits thier personalities and is hilarious at the same time (e.g. Gaara concluding Temari should be Kazekage, Kankuro's "crying" and the many failed attempts and friendly/reassuring smiles). Also, I like how you gave Tenten little idiosyncrasies (like the hand-twitching). It's the little things that I think make this story great.

This is sucha good read! I really enjoy your writing, and look forward to continuing this fic!

Keep it up!

This was so cute! And I love your headcanon about team Gai s signature jutsu.

The amount of fun you seem to have with your stories is awe-inspiring! You definitely make it look so easy but the dedicated time and effort put into editing is truly an amazing feat. Keeping it light was key to making it flow so easily. These two characters are so far from ever being with each other, I had wondered how you would make it all happen, but true to expectation, you did it. Thanks again for sharing!

The toned down use of wording was my favorite part here! Unsavory language is not becoming of Team Gai. That's the best!

Tenten isn't phased by Gaara's status and he is wiling to put himself out there for her. Your incredible storytelling makes it all work. This is Gaara, the Kazekage, we're talking about here. Major kudos in getting there in no time flat with laughter all the way through!

The peanut gallery comments are simply hilarious. The sticky situation Tenten finds herself is just as you make this reader hoped it would be and the laughs keep continuing from bedtime until dusk again!

I absolutely adored the reasoning Tenten could not sleep with Neji at the end. Must be proper and all with that. It's funny how she purposely does not see how it's okay to be pushed into a group hug with the Kazekage over and over again though.

The subtle and not so subtle ways you bring characters together is your specialty and this story is another prime example of that. Humor is a compelling drive to read on and there is no shortage of that with this chapter.

tentendarkmoon. "It was a record" HAHA. That was really funny!

tentendarkmoon. Very good story. I don't think i've laughed so much before. Keep it up. Please read my stories as well. THX.

This was a very sweet story to read. I never read a Gaara/Ten Ten pairing before.