Wow! Very well written and certainly one logical results of what Harry has been through to this point. So glad he has Dobby to help in the aftermath!

Gruesome, but I rather like it. It's what a child-torturer deserves, and honestly, I spent all of book 5 wondering why Harry didn't snap and deal with the obvious yearly-dangerous-DADA teacher issue.

Well that's different.

Creepy but very good.

Wow! Just wow! I could see this happening. I like the part about acromantulas should have invited her to take a walk with him, stunned if necessary, to introduce her to Aragog's descendants.

a perfectly normal reaction at last from the boy-who-was-groomed

I feel like Harry, confused questioning, but somehow calm

Do you know why you don't feel guilt for Umbridge's death, Harry? It's because she didn't have a soul.

That is a impressive continuation of having a 16 year old that have murdered people, wonder if he will be able to stop.

Ah, that is how Harry should have reacted to Umbridge. Not meekly letting hismelf get tortured. If only JKR had wanted to write about a hero instead of a victim.

This is more realistic than JKR's version... Good job. Scary, but good.

That's one way to get rid of a crappy teacher.

This ought to be very interesting. The Case of the Missing Teacher?

And this is how you get to psychopath!Potter. Nicely written, even if it's quite depressing.

Very well written.