Fleetwood Mac plays in the background

Hahahah Love it
When's the party

This is not an ending! This is torture! I hate your short stuff: they're sooooo good but you get evil and leave them like this. Finished but unfinished. There's so much left to be said and done and I can practically feel the banter through my computer and this non-ending ending makes me want to through a fit worthy of my two-year-old!
(I'll relunctantly add that this one, just like all the others I've read, is awesome, just so no one thinks I'm sending flames your way. Just disgruntled thoughts.)
~LadyKnight

HA! I'm not sure which is the best line of this chapter, him being so upset at looking like Charming or calling the ballroom a "Disney dreamscape gone askew."
You have quite the way with words, Scribe of the Labyrinth!

Intriguing :3

I liked it. Haha, Jsreth, no nookie til your cookies legal age

I was hpoing for a lemon but you know what? This was good. New favorite!

Great story :D

Not bad. *Snickers* I get the feeling that she is going to be just as much trouble as him. *grins evilly* Nicely done! I Liked it very much. _

Great story, I really loved that ending! :)

I love the story!

~Xela

I really like this one, and especially the real ballroom - much more appropriate to a proper fairytale.

Thanks!

~misunderstoodemon

Becareful of what you wish for Sarah! XD

You have done it again! I truly love the way you write and i have read about three of your stories. Hopefully i will finish all of yours concerning the Labyrinth and it's King.

Thera

how could you end it there after everything that happened... And, not to be demanding here but you HAVE TO FINISH IT FOR ME...

PLEASE!

Cio,

The Hooded Falcon