Well written and great plot. Enjoyed the story just wish you would’ve completed it

I am still reading this keep fighting I believe in you. I keep this story saved and reread it to remind myself why I love naruto so much :)

I read all of your stories at this point I’m sure all of them are bookmarked in my phone including your page so I can check to see if you’ve written anything new. You’re such an amazing writer I envy your talent. This is one of a few stories I constantly come back to and read almost every month. It’s one of my favorites you write the naruto world in such a realistically beautiful way that I’m pretty sure this story and your other stories will stay with me forever.

Rae I want to kill you. I hate Rae so much.

Omg iruka! ... So much for trust geez.

I've enjoyed the story.

Also. Your gran sounds like a less devious and harmless version of what my grandmother was. I envy you not. It's kinda wtf to deal with. lot's and lots of wtf moments. lots of scars too actually. I loved my gran but i also breathed a sigh of relief. If she wanted to stab me it wasn't with a knife- there's a reason I'm terrified of needles. I didn't start that way. Even then, she was far more likely to convince another person to do it and several people were already dead for it-my parents for instance. Oh. Or she'd use whatever leverage she had to make you stay still for what she used her own two hands for. Demented... and that's who the state thought was better than my godmother-someone whod never have nor had she ever hurt a hair on any of our heads... passed over for the one person my mothers last will specified should never be alone with any of us, least of all any of us kids placed with her-in the event anything happened to her.

Both the state and my remaining relatives who weren't children at the time or now... can seriously go screw off. They just hate I make no secret of the things grandmother did. There precious reputations. They like to pretend to deserve them when more than enough knew somethings had gone on. It still pisses them off I talk about it. They still have not figured out I've disowned them in my way- and that means what they think about the truth they hate and are so afraid to be associated with is not my concern.

It's people like those who want to ignore the horrors that go on, the wrongs, abuses of power etc, who help create the environments and attitudes that make them more instead of less common. Next time someone says merely gaving rape IN your story is glorifying it, please give them that verbal slap for me-because silence can do more damage than the words spoken and this is one of those issues where pretending it doesn't exist or blaming the victim of the act makes it happen more. By excusing it they spread the idea it's OK. THAT we all should have a problem with.

I re iterate. whoever said you were glorifying rape has no idea of what they speak. You have written a beautiful strength to her, where she both carries it and keeps living- the balance nobody seems to like to admit is how it works. Nothing changes the fact it's carved into your very being. None of us get to leave it behind the way society has decided or might like to imagine. So yes. I like how you've written it though I'm curious... about things that i won't ask.

you've not uplifted rape. you've just written a world where bad things happen instead of the lala land where the worst is death, heartbreak, or some barely ecplained type of "magic" that hurts ppl without the nitty gritty real life stuff.

The fact they put your story in the same category as the ones that use rape as a way to tie two characters together in a relationship(romantic) between rapist and victim- is appalling.

I promise. If you actually ever go into anything but 'this happened and she survived and yes it fucks with her even years laterrealistic shit in that regard... I'll tell you. Without hesitation. As a survivor of both torture and rape, I'll tell you, like ive told others, though most are receptive to being told delicately- I've been blunt when needed.

The stories that fit into what that person accused you of are not yours. It's IN your story. You've made no move to use it to attempt otherwise. Can't even quite say kakashi and her sleeping together was entrapment because she literally didn't know the gravity of turning him away but chose to because Naruto couldn't and she could and he needed help. Nobody said "I'll/kakashi will die if you don't...). So that can't even be called rape.

If anything it just makes her character stronger. I mean i pushed through some things but all these years later there are some things I still cannot do because they are too similar to mockeries of those actions that were used to injure and otherwise torment me besides outright rape. Jaw dislocation is a thing and there are still places my better half cannot even touch me and we've been close for over a decade, together for a little less than half that though it will go over in a year or so. He knew me when it happened. I trusted him before and after my upbringing that was a short list to begin with so as you can imagine- he earned that trust- well there are things even he cannot do and things I cannot do to him- because of it. I dare say it's easier when it's just rape. I'm not proud of the fact I've experienced rape more than then to even compare it- just know it fucks with you deeply and even if you push past it- your never the same and part of it becomes too part of you to be 'pushed past'.

No. I get offended by ppl who use rape in a story then go "oh all better" as if it wasn't something horrible but if they take the feedback about that and use it-i know it's not on purpose and appreciate the effort to not piss on rape survivors by disregarding the seriousness of it. By people who use it as a means to bring two characters together in a romance by getting the main female protagonist pregnant by rape then pushing them together as if that's anything that'd happen. I'd become a murderer before I ever willingly touched my ex husband ever again after what he did- or any rapist for that matter.

Let me be absolutely clear. You present the issue as gently as possible with your writting while respecting the seriousness and showing the character respect, through other characters-even in the nitty gritty world of ninja- for her strength to survive what they train for. Real life historical female ninja could expect worse, publicly, than simple rape. More akin to torture and rape- to utterly break her till she could no longer string the words or thoughts together to beg for death for them to give it or until her body simply gave out during and she died then. They were trained to have a possibility to escape that and if none... well. many had means of suicide if captured for more than to protect information. It is bevause death was preferable. So compared to what could happen your idealistic but innocence is like that. Most ppl have never been in a situation they begged for death or clawed survival from a situation others waited for to drive you to suicide or for your mind to crack because of the severity. It's not pretty. No.

Yours is a relatively innocent take and even makes the survivor strong in a way trained ninja in the story still might not be even with training. It also fits the anime, which glosses over or straight up refuses to acknowledge the vile parts of humanity.

I like how you've done it. It's not glorifying rape. If anything, I'd imagine the characters ripping dimensional boundries, if they so could, just to destroy him for it. I'd imagine, even with all the shit, that would feel pretty nice. Different world from her assaulter and with people who care enough to protect her when her own strength isn't enough... many times a fantasy I had. That ir suddenly all the ppl like that in the world suddenly dropping... but then ive got little hope for humanity to think lots of ppl would even be left.

No. Your story definitely does not glorify rape. It does however try to be delicate about specifics, which despite my original works slightly grittier approach, I appreciate. Some perv would likely get off on it. No. I can imagine just fine and applaud her strength. I've seen too many fall apart and drown in it ne

This chapter. I've not laughed like that in many years. Tears almost formed. From laughing. That never happens. This was great. I never thought trolling Kakashi would be so fun to read.

its been a while I missed this story. try selling your stuff on Ebay if nothing else works.

Is it just me or she acts like his mother

Great story! I'm so happy you updated :) can't wait to see what happens next :)

Naruto is a Sannin level ninja...how the hell did he get injured by low life shinobi thugs?

Good story but Naruto is SUPER OOC.

This story is so... weird. And twisted. Till now I've kept reading because of curiosity, but I guess I have enough. It's not a bad story, though it's not a good one either. Well, some people obviously like it, so good luck