...I can't even decipher what I’m feeling. The ache and pain Jo’s feeling for finally realizing her old world was never going to come back. That everything was gone and this was her reality now.

I wasn’t expecting the Zane portion of it but it was a very nice edition because they both ache and it just felt right to have in there.

I enjoyed this very much, which makes me a sadist. This was very well written. Thanks for it.

That was amazing. I really felt for Jo and then Zane. Very good style and word choice!

Oh man, that was *intense*. I really can't think of any more to say about this fic. My mind is totally blown. Dude, awesome.

Very good, I hope you write more to it.

WOW... You have an amazing style of writing and I love it, it really plays on the emotions, I really can't wait until you right something else, it's one of the best prices of writing I have ever read (and I do ALOT of reading) you should be really proud of yourself :D

that was great. very angsty. very true to the unfortunate place this season has put them in. great job.

This is...there are no words for the brilliance! I love your writing style for this piece and you did an amazing job at keeping Jo and Zane in character throughout the different scenes. Officially going on my favorite list :D