Waa.

It was a quick but full read. Very lovely, and clearly written.

Good work (:

Ah, this is just wonderful! I wish I could leave a more intelligent review, but my brain is pretty much fried. Know this: I love every bit of this story. Really, there is not one part I don't like.

Great job. :D

-Ambiguity of the Avocado

Gorgeous story. I love the way it was written. The way it swung from one extremity to the other really does a good job of reflecting Proton's state of mind (which seems rather delicate at this point). The fragments and snippets of thoughts also adds to the feel that we're in Proton's head, and it works very nicely. I really like the Proton/Lyra pairing and this was definitely a great portrayal of (the more angsty) side of it. Anyway, thanks for the fantastic read!

A very well written story, a lot of ups and downs in it - makes you think about it. I loved the Leaf cameo, a nice touch!

I totally believe that Silver is Giovanni's kid too. I used that for inspiration in one of my pieces and I made Athena (I think that's her name) his mom. Just look at his hair and her's - it's completely obvious!

Anyways... Proton/Lyra. Love. Just love. You got me into this pairing and this is probably one of the best pieces I've read of them. Good work!

It's just so dark to me... and gorgeous. I like how you made Silver be the knight-in-shining-armor when, really, he's anything but. It made the piece all the more twisted to me!

I'm trying to review all of the pieces that I've read (which is, honestly, every single one of them) so hopefully my babblings won't annoy you!

Great work!