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Dione Robertson chapter 3 . 2/28 OMG...this tale is a PERfect marriage of humour/plot/sexuality! Great explanation of domination & how exploring it can be healthy! Respect. Well done GRAND Mistress! (Feather 2 u for Spook & Nyota speaking of Bones/Chapel in closing chapter!) |
Kameosis chapter 3 . 2/16 Very powerful and moving Spock is the quintessential male dominant yet subserviant equally and very compelling. Good Job! |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2019 This whole story was so GOOD! I'm glad I found it after all the chapters where uploaded, because I read the whole thing greedily. This was very well and creatively written...and smoldering..."Yup" LOL |
whirlingskirts chapter 3 . 7/5/2018 I think I like erotica even better than smut. This was very intriguing. The intimacy was palpable and I loved using Kirk as our voyeur. Thanks for this! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/26/2017 Brilliant story! I am amazed it doesn't have a hundred reviews. I loved all of it, Uhura was exceptionally well written - her everyday persona, her transformation, assuming her new role and the coming back to what she wanted to be, to what she felt she was. Also the relationship between Spock and her was very well done. I believe you achieved perfection on terms of balance. But my favourite part was the conversation between Kirk and McCoy in the third chapter. - Kirk sighed and said, "You know, I sometimes think I hate Spock." "Yup." "God… Bones did you see her today?" Kirk almost groaned. "Yup." "It darn near singed my eyeballs just looking at her." "Yup." ... "Do you think we'll ever get to sleep tonight?" "Nope." - As I said - I do believe you achieved perfection in terms of balance |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/19/2017 No need for the "puppy dog eyes", you did a splendid job. Thnx for the read. |
jennifer.henderson.737 chapter 3 . 7/27/2016 This was so cool! |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/23/2016 A good read. |
isolde1224 chapter 3 . 6/30/2015 Great story! I really enjoyed how Nyota put Chapel in her place. It seemed like things just finally came to a head. Are planning to write or have you written the drama that led up to the confrontation? |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/12/2015 Really enjoyed the read. Good to see Uhura with a major role and she really nailed it. Nice handling of the Chapel matter. Thnx. |
minaghostwolf chapter 3 . 7/19/2014 This was so lovely to read. :) |
Majestrix Stormbringer chapter 3 . 11/13/2013 Woo! This was hot and sexy and kind of sad in a very specific way. Nyota has a part of herself that she keeps hidden away not because she's ashamed of it, but because she doesn't particularly like indulging it. Perfectly reasonable and private; when she's forced to bring it out (and parade along with it) in public and do things against her will it made me uncomfortable. Like a voyeur who hasn't asked for consent. Powerfully written, especially how you had her coming back to her preferred personality in degrees, which read as organic and realistic. Thank you so much for writing! |
Kameosis chapter 1 . 4/15/2013 Great Story, I love that you show the McCoy/Uhura subtext, which is very different. I don't agree about several reviewers saying the rating should change, there was no overt smuttiness. That is the great way you wrote this because the hottness is all implied and very "visual" Love all your work! |
Saissa chapter 3 . 12/30/2012 This was a wonderful story. I wonder if I could be a real Bitch like Nyota. I'm not into leather and domination, but I am certainly not a submissive person either. |
PoorQueequeg chapter 3 . 12/8/2012 Argh. This was so awesome I have no words. My fave parts - Uhura slapping Spock and then the scene with them alone in their quarters at the end. |