Yay! More.

I am loving it your story. update more soon

Yep. Gai's in a load of something foul... and deep.

Nelys
The first thing I read wrong today. Instead of reading 'they ate by the fire.' I read 'They ate the fire.'

Then I did a double take XD. Nice story BTW.

This is great I look forward to more

Yay for Confidence! lol can't wait for the next chapter.

oh, i love it.
i can't wait to read more!
and wat is gai doing to not be there with his wife?

i love it

Hey, I like this story heaps! You should post it on Wattpad if you havent already! Inbox me if you do! Carly_Panda

Oh dear XD Poor Guy. He got kissed by a dog instead of the girl he likes...

XD Oh this is so funny... XD I want more of the looking goofy Guy... Wait, he always looks goofy... But anyways, I want more story, less present chitchat. I agree with the twins, I guess XD

This is such a cute story XD Very Guy-sensei! And very, very much his silly self... I love this fic so far :)

Quibbles: It was short, and it could use some more detail on settings and exactly what happened. I found it a bit too vague for my taste.

Pluses: Guy is very much in character. Sato is an intriguing character herself, and I want to know more about her. You know, her background, her favorites, her dislikes... And I like the plotline. The flashback style of the stories is very unique. I haven't run into a story that really uses this type of format.

Hey... This is a bit of review fishing, to be honest, but since we both like Guy-sensei... Please look at my story. The Hotheaded Princess and the Green Beast. It's centered around GuyXOC, like this one, so I'd love it if you gave me your perspective...

Haha, he's soo gonna die!

I am going to guess twins!

1 boy and 1 girl!