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Great story i hope you get around to finishing it if
Not then it was quite entertaining

hahahahahah! This chapter made me so excited (in all different meanings)heheheh...

I'm planning to give a review after I read the whole story. But I can't wait another chapter to commend you on how beautiful you write this plot. You are one of those writers I have read from,who are using the same AxS team up, that I have to look up if ever I want to start writing my own. You are all great!

I like the feeling like I am IN THE SCENE while reading. I see the surrounding in which the characters are seeing with their own eyes. I feel like a bystander watching the actual things happen. I really do respect those writers that entice their readers not only by the words used but by how they describe every thing, every feelings inch by inch...and give us an experience of being there...experiencing the moment...I've only joined this FF community recently and is enjoying every AxS FF. I am fascinated with this 2 characters ever since i've watched the anime. They are just bad-ass...and bad-ass-er after reading FF of them as much more stronger characters than they originally are. (evil grin)

First I finally found it and then it says that you are going to rewrite it. I'm dreaming right?

OMFG fucking finally! I forgot to add this story as a favourite and I've spent years trying to find it again

Keep this sweet work up loving this

Just want to help . The Phase in romanian is "Pasarea lui Hermes ma numesc , mancandu-mi aripile ca sa imblanzesc" . You have no idea how bad google translate screwed that

Wow I didn't know you were going through that. I honestly found the this story to be interesting and well written. I'm studying literature and I love fanfiction. While there are some truly trashy works, yours wasn't, it was simply brilliant.

Espero que puedas traducir bien estas líneas, ya que quise escribir esto en mi idioma (español) para no perder ninguna palabra:

Así hayas tenido 17 años cuando escribiste estas historias de Hellsing, para mí son historias escritas por un profesional. SON SIMPLEMENTE INCREÍBLES. Particularmente adoré y sigo adorando Submit to me y Run Little one. "Run..." es de lejos el mejor fic de Hellsing que he leído, créeme que lo he releído 3 veces completo esperando su actualización. Muchas gracias por escribir ese fic y espero que puedas continuarlo. Submit to me fue el segundo mejor para mí, así que espero la reedición también. GRACIAS POR ESCRIBIR TAN MARAVILLOSAS HISTORIAS.

I committed the Fanfiction sin of reading and re-reading without reviewing so I want to make my opinion about this fanfic known: this is by far one of the best if not the best Alucard x Seras fanfics I have ever read. The characters are as true to the great Kohta Hirano's portrayals as any writer other than Hirano himself could be. I love the Alucard x Seras pairing most (with Seras x Hans being a close second) that was what made me first take a peek at your first chapter and I've been swept along with the storyline ever since and loving it more and more with each chapter.

Not going to lie, I was down when I read and author's note and not a new chapter, but your reasons (perfectly valid btw) are your own and as a fan I will respect them. I'm sad you won't be seeing this particular version to the end, but at the same time I am excited to see a rewrite and lastly I am just plain ecstatic that you are leaving this version on FF. If I were a writer of your calibre I would plead to adopt it, but I'm not, so I wish whoever adopts your work the best.

Thank you for an amazing fanfic of my favourite Hellsing pairing and I will look forward to any and all works you post in the coming future :)

I found this story a little while after you stopped up-dating for it, but I fell in love with it! I have gone back and re-read it a couple of times and it is still one of my favorite Alucard/Seras stories!

I am very excited for the re-write and thank you for leaving the old story up for everyone to enjoy! I wish you well in your writing of this and any other story you write in the future!

I must say that I am excited for the rewrites! For those three fics, and I am happy things have gone your way and karma has been kind for you.
I shall be on the edge of my seat awaiting for the rewrites, but while I wait I am going to read the first writing you did so I can compare them, it's a fav pastime of mine doing that!

I felt that this story was pretty smooth, but I would be interested in what kind of rewrite there will be.