bruh fck frank, throw that piece of sht outta here i better not see his arse in future chapters.
this fic is several years old and this fking chapter more specifically harry losing to frank is bullshit.
i mean you let frank dodge 3 consecutive spells shot from harry while the platforms is frozen and he had to thaw it out and then move out of the way, harry would have immediately noticed the penetrated hole in his serpent and have enough time to put up a shield or dodge the stunner in coming, not standing still doing nothing fck lowering his gaurd who lowers his guard in front of an enemy? not fcking harry whos been through soo many near death experiences and actual battles.
and then after frank won you just showered harry with the pity, "But let's hear it for both of our competitors ;they did a job well done" ah fck that , let go to the kitchens to celebrate harry's efforts suck a fckin dck.

Good story

i really like this story. i hope i can know the ending

Authors create several types of Harry's. Good, bad, powerful, stupid, ignorant.

this is an ignorant Harry. It's really irritating. Can't read more of this nonsense.

Shittiest beginning to a time travel story. I have lost all interest.

One moment he is being bias little shit the next moment he is a love sick little puppy. Stupid author

Wow harry lost all his wild card in a day. Bravo author, no need to put him in the past if he has no advantage with other people sprouting about he time travel.

This Harry is kinda pathetic, i mean he can save a lot of people and it not like he is going to die before seeing his future friend. It is not like he is going to die that soon lol. He can save Sirius, his parents and all his friend instead off being a little pussy

Fuck you Phineas Bladder

Neville is related to Snape? That's depressing.

So I’m nearly halfway through this and only a few months have passed in the story, it feels like it’s being dragged out. I’d suggest getting to the point. For example I’ve read a story that, whilst being double the length of this one, covered Harry’s entire lifetime in detail, without feeling dragged out or rushed. It was called ‘For the Love of Magic’ by Noodlehammer. I’d also suggest reading it as it’s a good read and a good example of an excellent fan fiction.

This is well written from a grammatical and spelling standpoint.

The relationship between Harry and Bellatrix falls flat. It is not one of equals but Bellatrix accommodating Harry. He’s free to pursue his ideals (good) but she’s not free to pursue hers (bad). While Harry is right, from my subjective view, he’s not right from Bellatrix’s. They don’t find believable common ground. And Bellatrix is no wall flower.

Did Harry even train to fight Voldy?

Why hasn't Harry invested his money at Gringotts? There should have been more dealings with the Goblins.

Bellatrix should have been called Bella by Harry which would give her a special place in his and her mind.