Another beautiful pokeshipping story :)...well done! :)

Lol you spoiled the last chapter of the sequel before it even began? Lol

I thought she was gonna say the father was someone else lol

Finally lol

I guess they'll only meet in the last chapter lol
Idk, I think it's dragging on too much. I think I've never read a shipping story that managed to keep the characters away from each other for 30 chapters (I won't consider the phonecall and the flashback lol)

Ok, I wasn't gonna say anything because I thought it was just a one time mistake, but it happened many times...
"Daisy Waterflower couldn't stop smiling. Her baby sister was finally coming home, after almost a year."
Shouldn't it be almost 2 years? Misty left right after finding out she was pregnant. Then aprox 8 months passed. And then 1 year. So it isn't almost 1 year, it's almost 2 years. Ash said he hasn't talked to her almost 1 year too, but it's more than that.

It's funny how it never crosses his mind that Misty might know about Dawn lol

It's funny that Ash is still such a kid but Misty is all grown up lol

It took him a whole freaking year to go looking for her at the gym?
I really wanna know how he's gonna explain Dawn. I hope it's not the lame excuse of not wanting to see her cry (although I KNOW it's that).

Lol he left the gym saying he would find her. It only took him 1 year even though he knew where she was lol not to mention he started dating Dawn, wth?
Oh and I forgot to say his break up with Dawn was much easier than I thought lol

Yeah, it was already obvious you don't like Dawn lol
That's funny, most pokeshippers I've seen don't have much of a problem with her. Although when you wrote this DP was airing, so I guess maybe you've had some disagreements with pearlshippers? 'Cause the only shipping I see getting hate right now is amourshipping and that's probably because amourshippers are a pain in the ass because they think it can become canon lom

Great sequel probably better than the first story. I liked how Ash got angry naturally but he calmed sown let it go and put it past him (as he said what's done is done he can't change it, it may always be something he doesn't like but nothing good would come from dwelling on it).

Now I'm going to read the third story.

Nice work! This story is really good. I do have a question: In the games, you have to beat Lance and the Four before you travel to the next region. That didn't happen in the show? I've missed most episodes. Again, great job.

Oh, boy... This is good so far. The slight tension from wondering what Misty will say to Ash is intense. I can't decide if I should keep reading or catch my breath.

Haha, nice XD

Awesome story. The only complaint that I have really is that I personally think that the whole issue between Ash and Misty wouldn't be resolved that fast, but that's just my own opinion. Other than that, I thought that this one and the one that comes before this (Sorry, can't remember the name atm XD) were awesome.