Reviews for Calling |
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![]() ![]() Very good story, but why does McCoy always send Kirk away when poor Spock is finally just awakening? Surely, just because he has lost some hours of sleep...and one assumes Kirk cat naps in a chair...in the 24th century, one would assume Sickbay would accommodate the Captain wit a Sleeper type chair...that Kirk could stick around and comfort Spock a bit, without some overriding worry for the Captain’s own collapse! Personally, I think McCoy is just jealous! Lol! That would make for a good follow up, Kirk always being chased off by McCoy...just as he is visiting and pampering Spock...and finally Kirk confronts McCoy about his “Mother Hen” interference. Just a suggestion. |
![]() ![]() Nice piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *has feels |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this good story about friendship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. How did Spock get ill can you make a story about that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so fluffy I'm gonna die! In a good way of course ;) There is a grammar mistake towards the end, which I'm not sure if you caught or not. In the sentence "Spock felt weak and did not knowing why he was so weak..." It should be "know" instead of "knowing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. Epic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...I really loved that! It was totally short and sweet, and demonstrated some awesome friendship between Spock, Jim and Bones. If only more Star Trek fanfictions were like this. Congrats, because I'm a really critical reader. Keep up writing awesome fics! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The friendship fic was very welcome after trudging through endless smut... not that I'm against it, not at all, but I'm a bit (just a bit) disturbed by the graphics. Yeah. Awesome! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwww! This is so sweet! I haven't seen a lot of sick!Spock fics, so this is really cool! Hope to see more *Spock whumpage* fics like this! ~black |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwww! This is so sweet! I haven't seen a lot of sick!Spock fics, so this is really cool! Hope to see more *Spock whumpage* fics like this! ~black |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved to read it! :) You caught the characters well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ AWWWwwwwww... |