Great story! I enjoyed your concept of the connection between the Labyrinth and Jareth and Sarah's love.

Awww! This story was so sweet!

Loved it xx

Aww, what a lovely story! Thanks for sharing.

Great story!

Lol, "veins pooping out" lol, but really, great story! Very few spelling errors, well paced and well constructed characters. I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Please keep writing! :3

i loved this! the last chap is so funny! and sweet )

Based on the summary, I wasn't sure I was going to like this , but it's very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Excellent story! I just wanted to point out though that you never mentioned what would happen to Jaston and Catalina in a couple of weeks I'm curious to know

I love this story. Its extremely good :) very mice job.

Oh, I would pay good money if I were abel to see the looks on the faces of these councel fools when they realise that the "traitor" they threw out became stronger by simply standing by Jareth. They are that desperate for power that I am sure they will turn an array of colours never seen in the Underground or the Above! XD

Oh and I hope that a*#~%6 Oberon is lucky enough to find a way out of the obbliettes (sorry, forgot how to pronounce that silly place). Of course I hope that purely because that would make it possible for him to fall face-first into the bog.

Nobody more deserving! *smirk*

farewell,

~Tera~

Well, I have to say, I'm disappointed. It does seem quite the shame that you tired of writing this story so much that you simply "wrapped it up". I was thoroughly enjoying the backstory you were laying and the plot points you were introducing and was incredibly curious where it was going to lead, and then it seemed very much as though you became bored and finished for the sake of being through writing, rather than for the sake of seeing your story through to completion. Excellent beginnings, good characterization, and then a muddy end. :/ Such a pity.

great job

great story

great job