What happens after this? Is there a sequel? Maybe a little more healing

Very well done!

It's amazing, I thought I liked to read stories in which the characters are suffering ... but after reading this I have become so sick, so badly that it hurt the body and mind, he could not help but mourn, I had to write this comment two days after reading the story because he had no strength for it.
I went to bed I woke up crying and crying all day I was terribly sad.
You write so well ... so real ... this story is horrible, I hate with all my being.
But I love her, I love him very much, because it is very very real, the characters are authentic and feelings are genuine. It is the best fic I read Stargate Atlantis.
I thank you for having written, no I'll never forget, now I have eyes filled with tears and I can not shake this feeling of sadness.
I know it will happen to me, it was beautiful and terrible at the same time.
Thanks again for writing this.

It's amazing, I thought I liked to read stories in which the characters are suffering ... but after reading this I have become so sick, so badly that it hurt the body and mind, he could not help but mourn, I had to write this comment two days after reading the story because he had no strength for it.
I went to bed I woke up crying and crying all day I was terribly sad.
You write so well ... so real ... this story is horrible, I hate with all my being.
But I love her, I love him very much, because it is very very real, the characters are authentic and feelings are genuine. It is the best fic I read Stargate Atlantis.
I thank you for having written, no I'll never forget, now I have eyes filled with tears and I can not shake this feeling of sadness.
I know it will happen to me, it was beautiful and terrible at the same time.
Thanks again for writing this.

Wow. Such a thrilling ride. Having the story end as it did, I feel so sorry for McKay. I hope he'll walk again one day.
I loved the pain descriptions and esecially Carson's medical analysis. Brilliantly written.

I have never, ever, in all my years of devouring fanfic, ever been brought to tears by a story... But that chapter five... Yeah, you had me falling apart.

This was amazing, heart wrenching and extreamly we'll written. I don't often favorite stories, but yours is going on my list.

I'm so very happy that they both survived the crash. I know that Rodney might regain his voice and the use of his legs. I just hope that it won't take that long. I love the fact that John makes time for Rodney. They are really close. I'm getting ready to read the sequel. I will let you know what I think of it.

I am fairly new to the world of SGA fanfiction and happened upon your profile while looking for new stories. I started with The Consuming Darkness and was so enthralled I read all of your stories one right after the other tonight. I hope someday you decide to re-visit Atlantis and add to your wonderful stories as they are some of the best I've run across so far!
Happy Easter!

Sad, but great Story. Love Rodney talking to imaginary John...his berating covering the very real emotion of dread that his friend had died. Then it was John's turn as he woke and Rodney worsened. Tears of my own were shed as I read Of John sobbing that Rodney had died.

Truly these two had a wonderful friendship and mutual respect. Wild love to see a sequel where both are completely healed, the team back to its former glory...though I love Radek and think he would be a good fit for the team.

Thanks!

Wow wow wow wow wow wow. Totally freaking awesome wonderfully amazing story. :) loved it, and here is your soul cookie from me! :D

Wow! What a great story! Loved how ya had Rodney talking to John's "dead" body and how John (alive and kicking) heard him when he woke up. *iz a proud whumper* Ya whumped the boys good and proper;I liked how ya didn't minimize either man's recovery either. Good on ya. Cheers! }:O

Raven

And read this one - another kind of Wow. You know these characters so well, and you find original situations to show how they are, both separately and as friends.

I don't mind dark when it serves a story's purposes, and you do dark, and pain, and sadness, very well indeed. You also balance the dark with friendship and courage, and the strength needed to recover no matter what that takes.

Not enough time for your longest story tonight; I'll have to come back for the rest of White Death's tale.

I would like to think that the long gaps between your posted stories mean that you are also writing professionally. In my opinion you have the originality, and the skills, to find your way to publication, if you aren't there already. Can you tell me where to find your work?

Yes, I'd have to call this a fan letter. Thank you; Write On!

Wow, just... wow O.O I truly love this story :) at first I was reading it "just because", the plot was nothing special, but from the 4th chapter I was just amazed! When it showed up that John was still alive and the moment when he thought that Rodney was dead.. You made it in such emotional way.. that there was a moment when I thought I'd cry ;)

But why I like this story so much is because of the ending. I had read a lot of stories and I can assume that most of the writers would end it with happy ending where Rodney could walk again. You didn't and that's making this story so real. There is some kind of happy ending, because Rodney had woke up and is alive, but there are the consequences that everyone have to deal with. And when I read that Rondey also lost his voice... It was heartbreaking! But I loved it anyway!

And I would love to read more stories like this. It touched me so deep that I'm not sure that I made myself clear enough at this comment, but I don't care ;) It's one of the few stories that I would remember for a long time -it's great, touching and... the best!

Thank you very much for writing it! You made my day :*

Beautiful story, and I really hope you write something to truly finish it.

really well done here. i enjoyed this very much. i like how you kepth them in character and their voices true without going over the top with it. Very nicely done.