Very nicely done!

"he got a thrill out of the idea that his presence alone could make Carter's blood sing." -perfect puctuation to the dance that is their 'ship.

Great handle on their propriety and affection.

Another good one. Great handle on the characters.

I thought this was beautiful. Written with so much care to the characters.

Thanks for a lovely read.

I smiled through most of this story. It was nice. I love looking at stars myself. A clear night sky with twinkling stars is so beautiful and calming. Thanks.

:-)

AWWWW!

Fabulous in every way g

MSam

Very nice indeed. Loved their interaction, very sweet. Also liked the bit about "Carterland" - very apt.

That was a very lovely piece! I especially loved the bit about Carterland! Very much true SG1.

Very nice and intimate! It is great to see quiet moments shared between them. thanks!

Sweet :)

Totally cute! Loved it!

Nice :D

I love these moments when it's just the two of them, away from prying eyes and they can relax a little around each other. Wonderful story.

Awwwww! Too sweet. I really enjoyed this. You voice the characters really well-and I loved the line, "She was now completely absorbed in Carterland, a place he could never hope to go or understand." I like that Jack accepts that. Thanks!

Nice story, thanks.