Awsome start to a wonderful series :D

I loved it! You are a wonderful writer!

So cute. Loved the banter between John and Sherlock - extra points for some impressive characterization!

Fantastic I loved it

"Yes. If something can knock me down, it had better be phenomenal."

I crossed the room and returned with another pillow, stuffing it behind the others in an effort to help him sit up properly. "So if you caught the bubonic plague, then you'd be happy?"

"Ah, that would be brilliant."

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Despite him being sick, I believe you kept Sherlock wonderfully in character. Quite a feat! John was pretty close, as well. I love it! Short and sweet. :)

Aw. How Sweet! Love John at the end. It must be so frustrating trying to take care of Sherlock - he always has to wait till Sherlock's too weak to resist. ;)

Thanks,

Tabbiecatx

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Oof. The arrogance. 'It had better be phenomenal.'

And the plague line, ohmygod. 3

Let me love you.

B'awwww. This is so cute.

I love how you wrote John here. It's perfectly him.

Fantastic job! :D

Sherlock is such a child. I loved the Bubonic Plague line.

"So if you caught the bubonic plague, then you'd be happy?"

"Ah, that would be brilliant."

LOL! That was amazing!

Amazing! Simply adorable and clever! I loved! I do so wish it wasn't complete...

I like x)

Aw! Sweet!