Mostly good. As in, very good. The rhyme structure's spot on, it doesn't feel forced and fits the 'SatAM essence' quite well.

There is however, something that caught my eye, and that's the first and last stanzas. Like in the original poem, they're indentical. However, in 'Jaberwocky', a passive setting is described (Twas brilling, slithy toves, mome rats, etc.). Here, there's seemingly the reversal of cause and effect, as if rendering the events moot...unless Sonic is remembering at both start and finish, rather than there being chronological progression...heck, I'm probably overanalyzing. Good job anyway.

Many would believe this to be nothing more than a parody of the poem, but I think that you have managed to make this perfect. Original, yet faithful to the original "Jabberwock".

10 out of 10 for you!

...Holy mother of Chaos...

Excuse me while I retrieve my jaw from where it fell through the floor when I read this. It was just...incredible. Simply incredible. There is absolutely nothing you could have done to make it better...

That is, without exaggeration, possibly the best piece of poetry I've seen in years. Well done, girl! -glomps you-

Love,

-Kat

If your teacher does not give you a 127%, I will smack them over his head with a styrofoam bowling pin and steal their grade book! ... Well, I would if I could. But, if you don't get an A, tell your teacher that Aqua read your poem and she thought it deserved an A and that they have issues if tHey don't give you an A because they are jealous of your serious awesomeness. And Aqua is never wrong, you can ask anyone Aqua knows. I'll prove it; Shizuku Tsukishima is the best author ever. See, I was right. :)

But, dude. I've been told I can write poems, but you can WRITE POEMS! The capitals make all the difference! I don't know what a "Jabberwocky" is (my best guess would be a character from Star Wars...lol) but you did it goodly! I'm jealous-, but I'm happy for you for making a wonderful poem. At first I wasn't sure how one does a Sonic poem, but then, this is you, right? My favoriteest author on ? So I decided I would not be let down! Ands I wasn't. Yayyyy! (Psst I'm a little hyper so this is riddled with misspells, made up words and grammar mistakes, but what's new with that? XP)

Aqua

Ver Very Good! I Love jabberwocky and this is a great fitted perfectly with Sonic and was (at some parts) funny. it also was close to jabberwocky. If i were your teach i would give you a A.

Wow, that was AMAZING! Wonderful work! D