This is so cool story, well-portrayed! Thank you for creating such a masterpiece.

Please continue this story

Please Update!

Emiya soooo teeeeeeaase! Poor Rin~~

PLEASE UPDATE!

Well... That's a crappy place to end.

I want to know how but this hasn't been updated. It's been captivating so far. A concept I personally like, written brilliantly.

I was told that even though this fic was on hiatus, it was still worth a read. I can see now that was definitely true.

Waiting for you to continue this. I loved every second of reading it. They are so in character and Toshaka's tsundere is on point.

amazing story

This is GREAT! FOR GOD SAKE WHY CANT YOU CONTINUE? THIS STORY LEFT ME IN AWE. T left for explanation and this cant be hanging up just like that. I love the drama. Please continue. I m begging you.

i have to wonder why shirou started to play thing gambit roulette, it is certainly planned to some degree, the character drama remains the best part though

theres a lot of exposition, but the character development is top notch

interesting use of in medias res, i wonder how far in the future he comes from?

Wow this is great! I love it, specially Shirou flirting with past Rin and future Rin...he really had developed a immunity against Rin's teasings...the fight with Archer was good too... I hope they can reach future Rin at time...and I wonder how she will react with past Rin, I think they can either clash and hate each other or be good allies
I'll be waiting for a update!