| Reviews for Portrait of a NonBetrayal |
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madmiko chapter 1 . 8/26/2019 I can't even begin to tell you how happy I was to read the description for this story. I have had the same thoughts about the canon storyline, and honestly, I always expected Takahashi to have Naraku pull almost exactly the same scenario on Inuyasha and Kagome with a vastly different outcome. I seriously don't know why she didn't. And I have SO often thought about how Kikyou never mentioned Onigumo to Inuyasha at all, so bless you for putting that in here. This was perfect! And I could see Miroku resorting to sorcery to help his friends. Great story! |
stranger1999 chapter 1 . 8/24/2019 Yet again you point out something that wasn't pointed out in the actual series and infact SHOULD have been, while Kikyo and Inuyasha did love one another there was little trust present which is proven by the fact that they were so quick to mistrust one another ive always felt that this was quite a solid point that was ignored in the manga on the other hand Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is built on trust and faith and this has been proven multiple times not to mention Kagome has seen more of Inuyasha then Kikyo ever did so i was really happy to read this!Your fanfics are amazing and im thankful for them! |
StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 Gods, your angst is soooo good! (But also so painful... *sniffs* ;_;) I don't believe I ever read a fic like this: a peek into what if Kagome was in Kikyo's place. Or if I had, it wasn't nearly as well-written as this! Very nice! :) |
Taiguery Madisen chapter 1 . 10/19/2018 How sweet you made this. Perfect even in Inuyasha's innability to say what he wants. Thank you! |
VixenSerael21 chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 I super love this one! It would have worked out so perfectly if this actually happened in the manga. Will there be a sequel for this one? :) |
Jay chapter 1 . 8/28/2016 I'm glad I found this considering how old it is. I really enjoyed this story. Great job! |
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 * fangirl flailing * Daaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww! |
BloodyKagome chapter 1 . 11/6/2014 Awe I loved it :) |
Lokiismylife chapter 1 . 10/26/2014 Simply gorgeous. |
xXKillorbeKilledXx chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Miroku saved the day :D Very interesting to see how it could have played out if the roles were reversed! |
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 11/28/2013 brief angst, adorable fluff and smiles all round...really what's not to like? |
Nice chapter 1 . 10/2/2012 I really respect how this was carefully written. In my opinion, this story could fit as an extra in the Final Act- like a little while after Kikyo's death (again). Though I don't hate the undead priestess, and I know she has a good heart, it CANNOT be ignored that certain aspects in her past with Inuyasha proves she doesn't completely trust him, nor does she fully accept him. And I'm a bit disappointed something so blatant hasn't been pinpointed at some point in the series. Which is why I love these kind of fanfictions, the ones that looks deep in certain aspects and converging it into a riveting story. I would honestly consider this canon, because Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship deserve more substance than what was given. |
Ninjawolf1313 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012 This was so cute. I honestly can see this being true. Kikyou happens to be my second favorite character (under Sesshomaru) but Kagome, in a manner of speaking,is a stronger person. She would have known better |
Rangurren chapter 1 . 11/5/2011 This story is so freaking amazing. Absolutely freakin glorious! |
imaginationpuppy18 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 I knew that was what would happen if it was Kagome instead of Kikyo! _ And Miroku was right about Inuyasha. Inuyasha never attacked Kikyo, she attacked him. And Kagome was right, even Naraku knows that Kagome loves Inuyasha. Inuyasha and Kagome forever, and anyone who thinks otherwise should be put in a mental hospital! XD |