This is brilliant, mate!

I loved it! It made me laugh a lot! Could you please continue to write the 12 fail proof ways to charm a witch please? Your stories are amazing!

That's funny and awesome.

soooo funny

That was nice :)

I will NEVER look at cats the same again.

So So funny.

LOL

Everyone writes these scenes differently, but yours stood out to me.

Your Scorpius is quite the funny man. Even his thoughts are entertaining- it was a good move to put this in first person. I had to laugh at this part "Even now, she could make me surrender with those piercing, blue eyes, just like 6 years ago when Al and I tried to copy off her homework." So funny! And then she calls him a drama queen, and he plots to dive into the bushes.

The "Nooo-oooo-ooooo" part was cute, too, especially the way he describes it as like being in one of those muggle movies. I also liked the fact that Hugo was playing a DS, it just seems like Hermione would try to incorporate some muggle technology into their lives.

The bit about Scorpius choking and the cat analogy was pretty funny. You captured an exasperated Rose perfectly, "What Scorpius is trying to say is that... we're dating."

And I'm thinking that Ron saw this coming, because if this was the first time he'd ever even seen them being friendly, I'm sure he would've blown a casket. The bribe was classic Scorpius, however, and the quote you were given fit in perfectly :)

Overall, nice little one shot :)

"What would you think about...wait, no. I know how to explain this. Okay, so say there was this cute little tabby cat that had shiny fur and the cutest little nose any one had ever seen. And then there was this other cat, right? Named, I don't know, like Whiskers. And then Whiskers happened to be the cute tabby cat's cousin. But here's where it gets interesting. So, one day Whiskers was meowing along and he said to this devilishly-handsome Siamese cat who was also his best friend, 'Why don't you date my tabby cousin? You guys are both attracted to eachother.' And then the devishly-handsome Siamese was like, 'Um. Sure.' Are you following me here, guys? You don't want to miss this. So then he asked her out, and at first it was kind of like awkward because they were, like, best cat mates, you know? And then like, BAM, they knew they were meant for eachother. But the pretty tabby cat forced the devilishly-handsome Siamese to talk to her parents, and before you know it he was spewing mice all over the place and telling this hypothetical story that isn't making sense...You know what I mean?"

I was laughing so hard! Love it! Favorited

I laughed so hard! Scorp is really funny...thank you!

LMAO the "here's where it gets interesting. you ready for this, guys?" made me gasp with laughter. omg. Amazing.

!cowardly!panicking Scorp is adorable. I hope you write more along this line! hahaha

I laughed out loud at the cat story. :)

Oh godric that's priceless. Lying in Ned reading off my iPod at half three in the morning and laughing so hard at his cat mates!

Aw so cute. I loved it. I have yet to write a Scorpius/Rose fic but I'm working on it. And when I finish I hope it's as good as yours.

I'm coming to love your Rose/Scorpius stories. if i hadn't been a shipper before, i'd be one now!

Oh, hahahaha. Oh, that was adorably so awkward. That was awesome. The cat speech... oh goodness. XD Awesome mortified boyfriend-father interaction there. Awesome quote, too. Perfect.