Love it!

Ah, loved it! You write very well. This was fun to read. :D

Normally I'm not a John/Sherlock shipper, but really this is just adorable.

Oh i love it! Of course Sherlock Holmes would need his brain rattled to realize he had feelings for John Watson. *pfft* Everyone already know, Sherlock! hahaha

Beautiful, wonderful portrayal of characters, and I really loved how sweet this was. Thank you for writing this.

This was adorable! I loved how in character Sherlock was. It was truly one of the better stories from Sherlock, the ones that really capture Sherlock's and John's relationship.
I absolutely adored this. Please keep writing!

I can't help but notice, Black Ice and Fire Storm, those are the titles of two of the books in the Young Sherlock Holmes Series

I very sweet romantic fic, and a very fun injured!Sherlock fic. Great combo

"...'Says the army doctor invalided home from Afghanistan after getting shot,'

'I had backup.'

'And I have you.'.."

OH, My, what a gorgeous line...

"...He spends rather longer than he needs to smoothing the first of the strips of dressing onto the cut, running his thumb over Sherlock's prominent cheekbone to make sure it sticks properly. Sherlock doesn't object to the prolonged contact, and John finds himself reluctant to end it. He gives himself a little mental shake, not sure where this sudden desire to have his hand on his friend's face has come from..."

OH, JOHN, SWEETIE, I HAVE MY HAND RAISED OVER HERE. I CAN TELL YOU WHY, YOU IDIOT...

"...Lips meet.

John's insides are dancing, his head is spinning, he is breathless and uncertain and sure.

Sherlock is warm, he is comfortable, he is happy.

This is not boring..."

STILL GOT MY HAND RAISED OVER HERE...

"...'Interesting,' Sherlock murmurs,

'Shut up.' John orders. Sherlock complies. There are far better things to do than to talk right now..."

OKAY, GAGGGHHHHHHHHH...JUST...LET ME...NOPE. I GOT NOTHING..

WONDERFUL JOB! LOVED IT!

great job! i will say, it was a little disorienting going from sherlock's pov to john's so suddenly, but it wasn't anything i couldn't handle, lol. especially considering how wonderful the fic was. great job! i can't wait to read the sequel! :)

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Great story :)

Thank you !

Oh, my. I love "first kiss" stories in this fandom and this is just fantastic. You did a great job of alternating between John's POV and Sherlock's. I especially liked this part:

"John, quite separately from Sherlock, does know what to label what he feels when he sees Sherlock, he knows very well what to call the feeling when he watches the brilliant man solve cases no one else could, he knows why he feels so desperately unhappy when Sherlock is in one of his moods. But he doesn't want to know; it makes no sense, he can't...he just can't."

Wow. Of course, John has more emotional insight than Sherlock does. He has been in love before; we can presume that Sherlock has not been. And it's just so touching to hear John's thought process, his own indecision or discomfort with what is increasingly obvious to him: he is in love with Sherlock Holmes.

Now I have to go read the sequel. And I see that you have quite a few other stories in this fandom. Wonderful! I love finding new writers here.

Emma

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well, this was so cute! :) the only thing i have to say is that when people talk you use quotations, " sorry, just when people done use them it bugs me cause the things you used ' i use for peoples thoughts... but other than that i loved it! and obviously i could deal with it! loved the end by the way! great job!