I read 'wild' years ago. I was rereading, still so good but I didn't know you had done more! happy to check through your other works. you're a great writer.

I like how this wrapped up. Good job )

~Tori

I must say that the way you've written this pairing is absolutely wonderful. The way that Honey stirs the pot of memories, so to speak, is amusing. He knows the bandanna has a deeper meaning for Takashi. Quite the devil's advocate that one. lol. Oh, how I'd love to see you write a longer story about how the MoriHaru relationship develops and where it goes. But I gather, and understand, that it would be quite a bit of work on your part. You'd also need a good plot for it. Still, you've done great with the one-shots you've written. Thank you.

How can we get you to come back and write more for us? The MoriHaru ship has so few talented writers for it, especially when you consider how small that ship is to begin with. I know it's been a long time since you've written for OHSHC, but really you are a great writer. Your style is one I enjoy reading.

It's a very natural conclusion. And really good! :-)

You know, for the strangest reason I was scared that this was going to be angsty... (especially with having sex and no prior relationship before)... But then the way you built up everything until the end, where they're both unaware of the whole convention of how relationships usually progress, it made everything look innocent and "natural". Like they didn't really care if they had sex first despite not getting to know each other well, because everything just felt... Right :)

Great, hot sexy story!

this was so good!

Hotness

So so so so so so so sexy ;DD I look foward to checking out your other work ;3

What a wonderful follow up to your other story. I really enjoyed this one, but I got a little confused while reading it and had to back track and re-read part of it. I didn't realize they actually went to Mori's house until I re-read that part. I think you did a wonderful job writting this and I must say the lemon was definitely juicy. You should consider putting both of these stories on

I knew haruhi had it in her! Awesome story. Is there going to be another one?

damn, that was hot. More chapters please.

loved it! need more! jk but it would be nice

Idk how you did it but you managed to put sweet and naughty together perfectly! Great job!

Another fantastic one shot /lemon. Great follow-up to "Wild". Going on my favorites list just as it's predecessor.