I enjoyed it. XD I was lightly amused by it all too.

This is really interesting. It's an exploration of the darker side of what Yami's existence, particularly in the early days, meant, but without itself being dark. It's almost a paradox. Very nice.

I forget at times just how vain the Pharaoh is. *snicker*

Nicely written. Keep writing!

At least I see now what all the fuss was about in your journal, lol. I didn't know you'd actually written a story about it! XD