Seperation between completely different situations with completely different people would be useful. Maybe one of those lines other people use? Or just some more distance.

(It was weird but Zuko really wanted to know everything he could about Sokka. The other teenager intrigued him. He really liked him but it wasn't like he could do anything about it.)

Liked is a bit too fast in this stage. Otherwise, alright. Thank you for not being completely mushy. You don't write badly.

... Ya know, with the random M-preg, I'm just pretending Sokka is female and this is a genderbender fic, since it makes more sense for the plot. If you read yaoi, M-preg pops up a lot, often without much in the way of explanation except for the fact that the writer wanted babies as a sort of sealing the deal on top of the relationship thing. I've become sort of meh about it, with a side helping of biology doesn't work that way ranting in my head.
And I've had very, very little fic where rape is treated seriously rather than as some angsty plot device, so, I very sincerely hope that you treat it with the horror and getting over it it deserves.

That said, your fic has spelling and grammar and capital letters and reads alright, so, I'll probably read it pretty far even if you don't.

That and trashy romance fic is a bit of a guilty pleasure of mine, but let's pretend I didn't say that.

this story was amazing! i loved reading about it and found it amazingly in line with how i think the characters would act in a given situation :D great job

Lovely story. Please message me if there will be a sequel. :)

Great story :)

Thanks for sharing. The last chapter was bit rushed but all-over very nice. It's nice that Zuko found a family at the end.

Azula disapeared? I don't want to think of her coming back. Can't you have something happen to her so she can't hurt them anymore?

don't mind me, I'm kind of a 'please I want all to be well in the end' sort.

I loved reading your story. I would have left review to all your chapters, but I came into a bad period and I had to force myself many times to leave some reviews to stories I loved.

This story was great, as in: 'why did you dare end it so soon? lol

I came to love little Tao and how Zuko and Sokka come together.

The anouncement of their engagement was happy news. The new baby made me smile. This time Sokka will have someone by his side for the pregnancy.

I have to go now: I want to save this fanfiction in my favorites

Thank you for sharing this with us.

With much love.

What happened to Tao? I wonder how will Katara react to becoming an Aunt to Zukos and Sokkas kid.

Thanks for sharing.

He's pregnant... I hope Zuko won't screw it up again.

Very nice chapter. Thanks for sharing and update soon please.

He's preggo.

One thing bothers me here. Sokka was tortured, had broken ribs and was starved, but now he miraculously healed? The chapter is very nice though. I really feel sorry for Sokka and hope Tao won't be taken by Azula.

O3O Just a minute ago there was only 32 chapters and I would have been angry if I was left with a cliffhanger.

Mai's trying. Support. Zuko has got to be some romantic huh?

O my, what a sad chapter. I hope Sokka don't have to suffer much more.