Reviews for KakaIru Fest Mini Bingo
narutonarutolove chapter 3 . 11/11/2014
crap, I wish this was longer. Kakashi being a slave owned by the Umino's, that's new. I wish there was more.
narutonarutolove chapter 2 . 11/11/2014
I had to re read the beginning to get that Sasuke WAS the ship, Ive never read a fic like that before, in which Sasuke was the ship, not a crew member. The Cargo-bay B was brilliant -grins-
TheHugeSwede chapter 3 . 7/21/2011
The last chapter's amazing, I re-read it several times a week, 'cause I can't get enough of it. :D

You shoult totally make it a several-chapter story, or even a longer oneshot.

Anyways keep up the really good work and write more amazing fanfics! :D
Atropa Haven chapter 2 . 4/16/2011
i had to go back and reread the beginning of this space cowboys thing before i realized that Sasuke was the SHIP. the laughs just bubbled up out of me, you're giving me horrible laugh lines around my eyes, i swear.
RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 2 . 1/13/2011
Haha i love it3!
RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 3 . 1/13/2011
Love it!
RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
I love this one! You c9ould turn it into a longer story!
Cptn. Suz chapter 2 . 9/10/2010
Aw, space-whales reminds me of the space-whale in Doctor Who! I hope these space-whales aren't as mistreated.
mp.rago chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
me encanto tu vercion del imperio romano...me gustaria que existiera un segundo cap de ellos pero ahora con algo mas de accion de mis bellos shinobis.

espero no te moleste que use mi idioma natal...pero mi ultima revision no la comprendiste muy bien y mi ordenador se desintalo el programa de traduccion...snif,snif!
illereyn chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
Nice!

You're so creative - I wouldn't have thought of KakaIru in any of these contexts at all until you wrote these. Particularly loved the last one - a very interesting twist of the Chuunin-Jounin dynamic when one's a slave but a respected, famous charioteer, and the other's a citizen but underneath his father's shadow still.
Tellytubby101 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
There definitely needs to be more period KakaIru AUs. Roman times especially-homosexuality was pretty much normal back then. Don't know where modern society went wrong, but at least it's getting better.

Anyway, I liked the concept "of a thousand races" as opposed to "of a thousand jutsu". Intriguing twist, too, was Iruka's higher status and how his father owned Kakashi... Short and sweet - not sweet, actually, more... hopeful?

Lovely.

From Tubby. :-)
Tellytubby101 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Bwahaha, I really should've read the 'space cowboys' with a bit more attention. The idea is hilarious and well done, I think. Sasuke and Naruto as the ships themselves? Bwahaha~!

The space whales make me think of the latest season of Doctor Who-coincidence or inspiriation?

Anyhoo, thanks for writing!

From Tubby. :-)
natural-blue-26 chapter 3 . 9/5/2010
And here I assumed gladiators when I read 'Romans' but this way better/more original. The emotions Iruka was having were really well done. :)
natural-blue-26 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Oh, I adore the space cowboy one- Sasuke as a grumpy space ship is just too perfect. And that Kakashi/Iruka have the kind of relationship where they're comfortable flying each others ships is awwwww.
TheaBlackthorn chapter 3 . 9/5/2010
I'd love to see more of this one!
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