*-* I love this fic! It's perfect!
The Black family is my favorite character(s?) in the books - Bellatrix e Regulos especially :/
I really wanted to translate this fic into my native language -Portuguese- you care?
Of course I'll give you all the rights for the fanfic, I'll only own the translation.
Please PM ou awnser this review if you agree or not - it will make not only me, but a lot of brazilian fans very happy ;) kisses

Ok, I absolutely love your Regulus freeverse poems, and I'm probably annoying you with all the review notifications by now)

Hm, I thought this was a very interesting exploration into Regulus! I have to admit, Black family angst is probably my favorite kind (and I don't like angst at all, so what's that tell you? P) and you pulled it off brilliantly here. Oh, Reggie-you're just a big ball of angst, aren't you? D I think you managed to capture his emotions of hurt and pain really well!

Terrific job, and keep writing!

Dx !

All I can really say is *SOB!*

My eyes just tear up with this. Riu getting to this point...where all the bad memories have built up and are just looking for a release...

Dx

-mew! D:

This is cool! I'm thinking of trying to write something in freeverse...maybe Andromeda/Ted...

Outstanding. Really and truely took my breath away.

You'r on air

(in water.)

And nothing matters anymore

because you paid your dues

(and you hope he realizes it.)

That's my favorite verse. It really did captured the idea of Sirius and Regulus's brotherly relationship. very very good.

This was simply incredible.

I love reading about Regulus and Sirius, and I loved the bond you showed. I thought this was a completely new take on their relationship and I love how you portray Regulus.

This is definitely one of my favorites of your freeverse's.

This was amazing! Beautiful free-verse! I loved it! Simply ... amazing! Grat job!

This. Is. Awesome. I loved it. Especially the part about grey eyes - awesome description there. An excellent piece. I really loved it.

I find Regulus and Sirius's relationship fascinating and it was very unique to see it portrayed in a freeverse poem. Points to you for the originality! Great job and thanks for posting this.

Absolutely stunning poetry. You know why? Because it's so poetic. It might be free-verse but t's classic poetry in a way- what someone would read in a non-fiction poem.

The words manage to touch the reader as well as to explain the situation.

:))

I don't really see such a powerful bond, especially from Siruis's side (Though I believe there was one from Regulas's side) with Regulas as most of the stories potray, but I really enjoyed the Regulas part :D This is a very well-written freeverse and I loved these lines:

because you paid your dues

(and you hope he realizes it.)

Very true :)

That was good. :)

It was really neat! I like the idea that you had going! Good luck to you all!

~Tanna