Please finish soon

this is getting juicy please uodate soon

update I love it

Love the story! Please update soooon!...

Please continue it was getting really good TT3TT

Nooooooooo why is it sooooo short please u have to update I just can't wait any longer

I am pleased with the story, but not pleased that it was so dang short. I was hoping for it to be a little longer or maybe a whole lot longer.

For a second there when you put Videl I was thinking Dragon Ball Z.

omigod pleeeeeeeeeeze update this! i adore the story line and im suffering without a fifth chapter

Didn't really like this preview. Why does there have to be some big knock-down, drag-out fight? Naruto has been hiding the children from Sasuke this whole time. He's been pretending to be someone else so Sasuke won't find the kids, AND he refuses to tell the kids very much about him. Even if Videl doesn't know very much about Sasuke as a person because Naruto won't tell him about him, he DOES know why Naruto pretends to be someone else and why he pretended to die. Him attacking Sasuke makes no sense whatsoever when he KNOWS Naruto is trying to hide the fact that they are his children from him. Videl is a ninja-in-training who knows all about keeping secrets. He's very stupidly giving himself away. And why should Videl be so angry at Sasuke? Has Naruto been bad-mouthing him? If anything, the kids should be curious about who this Sasuke is, but not jumping to conclusions unless they know for sure who Sasuke is - and they don't since they didn't recognize him when he came to the door. No reason at all to treat him like he's their worst enemy at this point.

I really don't get why Naruto has been hiding the children to begin with. It appears that Sasuke isn't an enemy anymore since he's been doing jobs for BOTH Konoha and Suna, which means he has the trust of two different villages, including Naruto's! On top of that, he's trusted enough in Konoha that he can walk into the village, ask where Naruto's widow lives, and go and pay his respects. So what the hell? Why all the lies and hiding? So what if Naruto and Sasuke didn't work out as a couple is that ANY reason why Sasuke deserved to be kept from his children? Why his children deserved to be kept from their father? The whole thing sounds ridiculously immature to me. If you are going to be a parent, you put your kids' needs FIRST and swallow your pride. It sounds to me like Naruto put his PRIDE first. If Sasuke isn't a dangerous criminal, then there really isn't a need to keep him away, now is there? So immature.

Videl and Marvella are names used for women, not boys. Also, it's been a couple years since I last took French, but the French word for life is "vie," and the French word for miracle is also "miracle." The word "miracle" is originally a French word. "Videl" and "Marvella" have no meaning in French.

omg please make the whole chapter soon all of them is really good

Kirua: You left me hanging...a teaser? Come on man.

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omg its so good update soon