Awesome. I like how you wrote it. It's very different and refreshing considering all Maximum Ride fanfictions are all clishè highschool fanfictions. Great job.

I totally love this story but it's kind of creepy how they never seem to talk to each other how they watch but never speak. You feel as if you are watching them from afar not knowing who they are what they are the people that they used to be. You know some of the story but just enough to guess never enough to know what it is truly about. I can not guess the plot because there is almost no plot that I can discern from the story. It is both a blessing and a curse as it will not be expected when the ending comes but it will be truly unike. It is a curse because it is a non-story and will never be a proper story because that is how it is written. It will become a haunting ghost story short and oddly chilling. I do not mean any disrespect when I type these words. these are just my reflections and you are left to interpret them as you wish.

Sorry sleep deprivation

It,s 11:50

Live well

-Mo

Awesome!

I love how you update so quickly but the chapters are still awesome!

Awesome beyond belief.

Wow. This is amazing! I love how readers have to figure out who you're writing about. Wonderful.

Awesome!

Oooh! A cliiify! How awesome! I have such a love-hate relationship with cliffies... And James Patterson. But that's besides the point. Please keep going!

nice story so far. now hurry up n type! :D

nice story so far. now hurry up n type! :D

Coolio.

Oneshot? It looks like it but a man can always dream... dream of a better life, one in the skies of cyberspace, free from the worries of the grounded, free to be able to dive, swoop, barrel-role, and read the second chapter of a wonderful fanfic...

I'm in a particularly sentimental mood today. I'm odd like that. Nice ff tho.

Heyy, that was really good! I'm the first review, YAY...this better not be a one-shot or you are DEAD! Update soon)) LOVE it so far!