Haha, this is cute.

OMG THIS. WAS. TOO. CUTE! I love Mitsunari so much 3 Good job!

LUUUV~~~~

wow i love this o.o...short, sweet, and to the point...it takes alot of skill to only write a story with dialouge but you pulled it off perfectly! well done ;3

Very original, one of the coolest little fics I've read in a while.

Haha, that was cute! :3 I love it!

A story void of anything other than dialogue - you pulled it off quite well. The trick to writing these kinds of stories is making fluid conversation that still gives the audience a clear idea of what's going on . . . A lot of people either fail to make it clear, or make it too obvious, which gives the story an awkward, angular feel . . .

. . . And such a cute story.

i loved it

MUAHHAHAHHA! IM THE FIRST TO REVIEW!

It was soo cute :D

yeey Oneechan is the best!