This was so great, so sad and so good. I particularly liked Prim's part - especially her first paragraph about the plants they were named after and they relate.

I also really liked the last part with Gale and Katniss being together for that one night, and I loved this line: ' "Pretend with me," she begged in a strained voice, still holding his face her hands. "Just for
tonight…" '

This was beautiful.

Very moving. I love that song by the way. I can see how it inspired you.

Mind-blowing story. Adds a lot perspective to Mockingjay and the whole series.

This style reminds me of the Mockingjay. It tore my heart open.

I mean this is in absolutely the best way possible, as an author you are wonderful.

So much angst! My type of story. You should really turn this into a full story. I'd love to read it.

Oh my Gale I'm crying! This was so amazingly done! I love how Gale knows Katniss isn't planning on surviving that just made this fanfiction so much more deliciously full of angst. Please keep writing! There needs to be mikre stories like this on fanfiction!

Ahh, this is a wonderful collection! I loved your portrayal of all characters involved and all the exuisite details and observations from their lives you included. And the beautiful writing style with numerous meaningful and perfectly faceted sentence-gems. Wonderful work.

I may be biased, but my absolute favorite was no. 4. I'm so overwhelmed I simply need to quote:

"He wanted to tear it down and he wanted Katniss to want that too." - one of the best "Gale's character and motivation in a nutshell" sentences ever.

"...their tongues desperately tangled in a knot of words unspoken..." - awww. Fangirl swoon. Imo, this was a perfectly in character example of Gale/Katniss communication how it should be ;)

"Her death would be Peeta's, but her life had always belonged to Gale." - and this is, at least according to my wacky interpretation, so perfectly in line with the meaning of the canon it's scary. Wah, if something like this happened in the original books, Id actually feel better about them.

Thank you very much for an amazing reading experience! :D

I'm actually not a katniss/gale fan, but that doesn't change the fact that your story is strong and bright and worthy. Great job.

Amazing. Simply amazing. I don't even know what else to say.

Am I favoriting this story? HELL YES.

Wow! It's very well-written and believable. You're a great author.

All these moments could be real and they were all heart-wrenching. Particulat faves were the Peeta/Haymitch scene and katniss and Gale, even though I am certainly K/P all the way. Excellent job!

Another Wow. Very logical - not every scrap wrapped up but in a good way that adds to the story rather than seems like a missing bit - love the little jump to canon where Katniss has it all ready in her head - expecting to have the goodbye - that will never be -very cool touch.

Wow - what a writer you are. Each one of those was so powerful, but I think the last one was the best/worst. I almost wish that had happened - that they could have one night together, although of course all of the Mockingjay events would still be horrible. But Gale deserved something.

You write so well. This is beautiful.