Reviews for The Price of Betrayal
MysticalKC chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Loved It! :D
CinemaPirate chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Loved it. When I first saw the tv series, I didn't like corny. Now, to have her get what she deserves... Love it. Lol
The Duelist of Dawn chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Heck no, I didn't see it coming! Dropping the bombshell on the readers, aren't ya! At least Irma saw her error, but Cornelia's really taking it. I hope the worst doesn't happen next installment!
DayDreamer9 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Whoa; I DEFINITELY wasn't expecting that o.O Put on some kind of suspension, yes. Having their powers stripped, no way o.o I can get it a little now why Irma flipped out over the past few fics, though I'm worried about Corny. Will things be ironed out? Can friendship prevail over hurt? I sure hope so.
Lucky OCB chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Oh! I'm so excited for the next one! I'm definitely gonna vote. :3
XV-Dragon chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Ouch, Irma and Conry got hit bad by the Council. Guess this is the story you mentioned a while back that was a little inpired by one of my own oneshots?

Anyway, great next stage in your onehsot series, can;t wait too see the next one!
ThePink1 at Reefside.Net chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
"Ohmigod, ohmigod ohmigod!" Taranee wailed, as Hay and Irma embraced at the end of the chapter, on screen AND next to her.

"Wow, this makes four stories Alchemy becomes a Guardian," Cornelia said, flipping her hair back.

"Somebody ... well okay, several sombodies, out there must think she'd be good at it," Will said, looking down at the Heart of Candracar. "I wonder if Elly's really told her the truth after all?"

"Only one way to find out," Cornelia replied, tapping the mystic gem.

"Review first," Taranee said dutifully, and they did just that before folding to Elyon's house to tell her about the latest happenings on New Chapter Day.

Whew! See what ya started, Lex? Or, continued, anyway? This does make a third different Choice for Alchemy to take as Guardian, too. She's been Water and Air before now, in other people's fics. (Including one of mine! ;D ) Let's see how she handles Earth. Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
Breezyfeather chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Great sequel! I'm looking forward to reading the next instalment. Oh, and you might find this bit of info usefull. When you say they were talking mentally, you can just say that they were using telepathy. So, when theyspeak to each other with telepathy, it's telapathically. Not to sound like an english teacher or anything, it's just been driving me crazy. No offense...
FullFixedMess chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Again, excellent work.

I really didn't saw that coming, but I think Cassidy and Alchemy make fine 'replacements'.

I'm glad that at least Irma and Matt got a bit back to normal (besides of being power stripped). Now only Cornelia remains, that girl really needs to put her pride beside her, even if it's just for one minute.

And, man, they all do have a lot of friends if they have to put two tables next to each other.

I'll be on the lookout!

Keep writing!

FFH
ChickenBake chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Great story well all your stories are good cant wait for the next one!
Kalims chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Alchemy and Cassidy! Suprising yet very good replacments. I'm glad that Hay Lin and Irma made up,but I;m so sad for Irma,she shoudln't have done what she did,but her intentions were not bad. As for Cornelia,not sad at all! She was the first who stood against Will in the first place,I hope she isn't planing on something agaisnt the guardians. I think I'll have to wait till the next sequel! Very excellent job!