I read this over 10 years after its first chapter’s posting lol. Not gonna lie, it was a bit of a hot mess (but a really enjoyable one!) in the beginning but you truly did improve a lot by the end so kudos! I so appreciate that you stuck with this story and finished it after so many years. This was such a fun ride and how you wrote the characters so lightheartedly was a joy to read. Thank you and I hope you’re well!

The ending was confusing. I mean I understood what was going on but that dream was freaking me out

If Lazard isn’t gay then we are going to have to have a serious talk about his professionalism with clients xD

So, a story that took four years to complete? Sounds like one of mine. This isn't the kind of completed story I was looking for, but with the high review-per-chapter ratio, I figured this might be worth a look. I don't like giving criticisms for early chapters to completed stories, since the author/s could have already addressed them later on. My one gripe here is how two people would speak in the same paragraph. Break different people into different paragraphs so it's easier to tell that someone else is speaking.

Great story! Good job and congratulations on seeing this through. It's really hard to find good, finished fics nowadays! Unfinished fanfics break my heart ;_;

Gonna read your RufTi story now! I ship Tifa with almost everyone lol. Plus, I love Rufus too so I'm excited.

Thank you for writing this! 3

I have to say that this was an awesome story. It's always sad to see a good story come to an end...I'm just glad it was a good ending. Thanks for writing this story ...I'm gonna read it over lol

I can't believe this is over ;_;

Hi there! What do you mean less crappier!? I prefer much better! Kinda reminds of me of a local celeb power couple, but, oh well. I enjoyed the ride too! And it wasn't a shabby end either!
Thank you. I hope you find the road that you are looking for in our world of literature!
Bon voyage!

Beautiful ending! Congrats on finishing this awesome story

Love cloti, Ruti, anybody Tifa.

Your writing has immensely improved. I bet the college program helped. C;
Please continue.

Actually, now that I think about it, this chapter was good in terms of giving Rufus another dimension. Who knows, he might have been lying. *hearts*
At first I thought this is one of those tele-novela/soap operas that I barely watch on the tv. still I haven't read anything just yet as I have more to go.
And the old park where the monkey bars are painted in red and yellow reminds me of the one we have near home.
Good luck!

Next next next pleaseeeee:(

I was hoping it was all a dream, so glad I was right! I love this story & seriously cannot wait to read more!

I'd like chocobo chicks, please. And leave all non-CloTi alone. Let it lie.