This is awesome! I love your OCs and your original countries - Atom country - as well as your incorporation of nuclear energy into this fic. It's extremely intriguing. You also do suspense and mystery really well, you kept me hooked! I hope you continue soon, and if you need a beta, I'd love to do it

Really great chapter, can't wait for more plz update soonish :)

This chapter was great, I am looking forward to more. I am glad you are drawing things out to make a nice plot rather then hopping straight into fluff and romance. Its fun to read but a story like this is very refreshing.

this is a really good story!

Great story so far; can't wait for more!

hahahaha. So apparently, because I am a new member, I cannot send private messages until 5:37 today. Thank you :P I have yahoo! instant messenger if you would like add me and talk. I am free now, and my id is the same: sunsetmyriad and my email just adds at the end. I look forward to getting to know you and being your beta! )

Oh, and my account pen name is sunsetmyriad :)

Well, there are a few problems that I came across, and unfortunately I cannot beta through for an entire month. It's one of the regulations with new accounts that I did not know about, and I also have to publish so many stories before I can edit other people's work on the site. However, I would still be happy to beta for you, if you are interested, through email. I have an account now, so private message me anytime. Sorry for the hassle! And I hope your story goes well!

I have a lot of high hopes for this story. It is perfectly understandable that you are waiting to incorporate the romance; I think it's great you are paying special attention to the plot because that adds a depth that can make the story richer and more satisfying.

I have read so much Naruto, I even dream as Naruto. Being a beta is something that I've honestly started to contemplate. I'm a second year college student majoring in creative writing, and it would be an honor to beta this story. You have really sparked my interest. The only part is that I've never been a beta for , so I will look into that just for you. This story has so much potential! Try to get one more chapter out soon while I figure out my stance on the beta thing. Maybe you already have one, but I did want to throw that out there if you are interested. I'll get back to you as soon as I possibly can. Thank you so much for this story.