I know this will never be updated at this point, but even though it’s 9 years later I wanted to tell you I enjoyed the story! I am a huge SiriWan fan, and it’s so hard to find good stories about them. Everyone seems to be about Satine these days, but she’s not my jam. I’m also for some reason a Dooku fan, so I was excited you gave him a chance at redeeming himself!

Please continue writing! I LOVE THIS STORY! I hope you can keep up the great work. Good luck and have fun!

So, now that I'm invested in these versions of these characters and with this timeline, you should really consider coming back to this story. Really. I know it's been a long time, but I want to know what happens next! I want them to have a showdown with Sidious, and actually win! I want them to face going to the Council and the Council having to face the idea that they might be wrong. I want them. I want to see more of Dooku and such. And yeah, I love it. I want more.

I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!

I apologize for my old review, I was even more immature then than I am now. I wish to see where this goes and hope you update.
Toodles until then.

Great series, I'm really liking it. Even though its been over a year, please update it again soon.

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Chewbrok

Very interesting - you seem to be borrowing heavily from The Clone Wars canon. It should be interesting to see how you take this story. And, incongrous as it seems, I do like the Christian and Earth references that you make. I do wonder, though, if Earth exists in the SW galaxy, does that mean that the movies do as well?

Anyway, good job, and looking forward to the next chapter!

You...you...Abandoned this story...If this continues for a year, I'll be soo mad.

Loved this chapter. That was so...warm,..familial...normal...Jedi can be family!..

Obi and Ani need to be careful though, they have their families to protect...with Sidious so close and all.

Loved the dolls, the child watching sports, the banter between Aksoka and Rex...,

Whats going on with Siri though? Great update! ~Obi's Mom

Yup, loved it but a little concerned about Siri suddenly being a bit off-kilter.

I still love it! The humor was great. Rex and Anakin...ROFL! I SO could see that happening. This was by far my fav chappy. Rex and Ahsoka were enjoyable too! Oh pleeeaasse update soon!

The scene with Yoda and Dooku is rather interesting and odd at the same time. Then again, anything with Yoda in it is automatically awesome in my eyes.

Favorite line: "Can I drive?" "No!"

One question: when were you going to post another chapter for either this story or Breakaway? I hope to see at least one more chapter for each before the year is out.

This has all been thinly disguised begging for more chapters .

God bless,

Historian1912

I love it.I hope Dooku does reveal who Sidious is and helps the Jedi for was a nice scene between Dooku and Yoda.

Great chapter! You're right, Obi-Wan and Siri are going to have to worry more than Anakin about their child.

Oh. My. Gosh. That was...superb. I don't think I stopped smiling the whole time I read this. Anakin, Padme, and Luthien was sooo cute and awesome. I loved it how Luthien told her dad about the baby...or is it babies? ;)

Siriwan was great and Dooku/Yoda was an interesting eyeopener into their relationship. I LOOOOVVVEEE IIITTT!

Btw, I love LOTR too. There was a marathon last weekend on TNT if you noticed. :)