Man, our Loopin and that stuff phase was scaaaaarryyyy. XD

So! /I'll/ look at Neville /that way/ and think of him in /that way/ if Dom's too scared. ;3 Neville's so irresistable!

The comparison between Vic's sun and Dom's star was great but LIGHTBULB!

Isn't the sun a star?

B) Yeah, it's given me something to think, too.

-mew! ;33333

Poor Dom, always in her sister's shadow, even in the case of the man she loves she'll still never escape the shadow. Congrats on coming up with these odd pairings that I never would have though of. When it comes to Slongbottom though, where is Hannah? Congrats!

-Dazzled

Good one. I liked it a lot.

Aww! Mor, this is so sweet.

I love that no matter how jealous Dominique is of Victoire, she still wants the best for her (love and whatnot xD). The comparisons were simply stunning, and I love how much of a struggle Dominique had to keep her pretty little mouth shut ;3

*C2ed*

Oh, amazing. I've never read this pairing before, but I do adore Neville/Victoire, so I'm happy she decided to let them be. )

I really like it, and it's not often that I like a freeverse.

I like freeverse though I can't write it. I got the Victoire/Neville thing because I knew you liked them. Awesome job.

I loved this, it was short and bitter-sweet. Great job for the first Neville/Dominique.

Beautiful! I think I liked the second verse best: "you're just an ordinary (not so extraordinary) Great work :D

So I got (unwillingly) sucked into the Nev/Victoire pairing fanclub. And now I feel the same is happening with this one. Really great. Maybe poetry is finally growing on me. Anyway, I liked it :)

I like this! I really liked the first stanza, and the lines:

You could never even dream of outshining her

because she's practically the sun

and you're just an ordinary (no, not extraordinary) star.

Really nice job with this!

Somewhere, the only thing that did irk me, was I don't understand why would she fall for him - like seriously, he might be brave and only, but still.. So I think thats the only thing that didn't work for me :)

Other then that, it was well-written and I liked how she always felt that she couldn't compete with Victoire - Not the way I really see Dominique, but it works here :)

Wow that was awesome. I can't say i've read a lot of free verse poems, but this was so good. I really don't know what to say, that's how much i liked it! Poor Dominique. You captured her feelings so nicely in such a simple way, and i bet that most girls can relate to her situation.

The writing was brilliant too. I love how you, you know bolded one thing, italicized the next... So cool and made it sound better when i was reading it to myself. :)

I'm sorry if this is a crappy review. Words have just failed me at the mo. :D Thanks for sharing. .

That was a touching poem. I loved the insight into the relationship between Neville & Victoire through Dominique's eyes. It was an original and interesting idea, and the line about Victoire being happy made me smile. I LOVED it.

Pairing aside (In a good wat! It still leaves me questioning - curiousity is born) this was brilliantly written. I love freeverses but cant write them myself. There is something hopeful and desperate about this.

Lovely!