So I've recently played Dragon age and adored it. A little late on the bandwagon, bit at least I got there eventually! And as I was redipping my toes into the fanfiction world again, I came across this fic of yours and just had to read and review it!

Such a sweet story. I love Leliana and Shale (I could listen to Shale's voice acting ALL DAY) and I think you got them very in character, especially with including all their little quirks. The Warden was very amusing; face it, you're never going to win against the might of Leliana's awesomeness ;)

I would give you a bit of constructive criticism, but this was written so long ago that it's probably all invalid! So I'll just say great work, I'll be sure to read your dragon age 2 stories once I've finished that one!

Mimi x

Lol! This is the warden that kill the Archdemon right? XD

lol. Even though I know nothing of Dragon Age, I still did find this quite enjoyable :D

One thing that I found hilarious is that a golem is going shoe shopping :P Though again, if I'd played Dragon Age, it'd probably make more sense. And I'm guessing he's scared of birds? :P

Anyway, yes, this was quite funny and that Warden of yours sounds adorable :P

Heh, I rather enjoy Leliana and Shale hunting for shoes with a very reluctant Warden. Poor thing. I suppose that Leliana's presence makes up for it somewhat?

hahah nice work i realy liked this and lol the parts with shale were prety funny keep up the epic work :D