Wow! Amazing one shot! Glad I found it! Can’t believe you haven’t written anything else! Your writing is soooo captivating! The lemon scene was a freakin inferno...full of raw, uninhibited, passion! *fanning self* Damn...Bath and Bodyworks! Hahahaha

Can I just say, I've had this story in my Favourites for years, and coming back to read it now was a real blast from the past. Your writing is amazing. Seriously. Bulma and Vegeta were one of my very first pairing ships and when I initially found this story I was shocked at how graphic it was, but now I love it. I can really imagine it being like this. Thanks for sharing it with us!

That was a well written one shot and lemon! Thanks!

One thing wasn't expecting was for Vegeta to perform in the level of sex god after the wind up of his self denial and annoyance over his attraction to Bulma. Was this a deliberate bait and switch?

Oh my! So detailed and vivid! Amazing work!

I love it

Really nice and sexy story.

Woah! Now that was just...woah! You are a really talented writer, why haven't you written more stuff? As soon as I finished this, I was totally looking forward to reading other material from you but found none! I hope you find the time to write so more BV stories!

AWESOME!

0.0 so ... heavy ... LOVE IT!

...I drooled.

love it and good for a first timer

I'm sad that this is the only story you have written! Your writing is wonderful and descriptive and I just had to leave a comment because one of my favorite parts other than the vivid detail and length of your story is your grammar and spelling! I had a great time reading this, and most of the stories I've read often have many grammatical errors and I didn't notice any on yours. I tend to be a grammar nazi at times and I find it hard to read stories if the grammar is incorrect but I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. Thank you for making my day! 3

HEY!

YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEAL TO THIS!

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Please can you make a sequel or a series to this?

great story. i really liked it.

Well done! It took me a goddamn hour to finish reading it (since I'm a super slow read O ) so I'm pleased it turned out quite well. I loved your style of writing! I enjoyed how you didn't have grammar mistakes popping up everywhere, as a lot of fanfics do. Thanks for the fantastic situation. My favorite scene was where Vegeta found the bubble bath! Anyways, thanks again! And good luck on future works!