Reviews for Colorless
totoro27110 chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
you always hurt arthur why not give alfred some of your love
Rory-kirkland chapter 1 . 3/6/2018
holy shit...thats all i can say...holy shit
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
This was beautiful in a dark shady way
SerenadePanda chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
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this is soo dark yet so interesting!
this story is disturbing in many ways but so addictive..
what the hell is wrong with my brain i don't know anymore...
i feel bad for Arthur to be used like that though...
Ravenclawmione31 chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
what did i just read?

That is probably one of the most insane gut wrenching things i have ever read.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
...Whoa...

This is The Greatest Tragic Fairy Tale I Ever know !

Change the Characters! Publish it ! Make it into book !

God, I Would BUY IT FOR REAL !

Now I'm afraid this would become one of story that I would tell to my children in the future...
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Oh my God. I am really starting to be scared of you. Your stories are all so sadistic.
Insane-Lane chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Holy shit, that was insane. And deep, and dark, and interesting all in one.
MayBell Lyric chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Ah...I've read four of your fics now and honestly, you are starting to scare me. What part of your mind compels you to write things that are so dark?

Such beautiful writing, though. And wonderful imagery. You use a lot of metaphors and don't mention any of the characters' names except for Alfred and Arthur. But somehow, everything fits into place as my brain automatically fills in what's happening. The first sibling to die was Scotland, whom Arthur killed tearfully and with immense guilt. The second two siblings were Ireland and Northern Ireland, who got along well until Arthur turned them against each other, resulting in them murdering each other. Then there was Wales, who lost a game to Arthur...I'm guessing that the game was about who could kill the other. And last but not least, there was sweet and kind Canada. And he liked pretty things? Huh? I think that means he was selling himself, or others, as prostitutes?

I'm guessing that the blue-eyed child is Sealand, though I have no clue who the other child is.

Reviews amuse you? You don't care if people review? It almost makes me shiver, as if you're smirking down at me for trying to sort out what is happening in the story.
Jenavive RoseThorne Gemstone chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
-cries- Bravo! Bravo! Encore! J'adore petite Arthur! I feel bad for him though...
Hornet394 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I saw the comic on devart, so I came here, and well, my feeld have been utterly… you get my meaning xp
Is it okay if I write a story (probably multi-chaptered) based on this one? I might not actually work on it now, since I'm a slow writer and all, but I really like the idea of snapped Alfred and protective arthur xd
Hero's Tragedy chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
What. The. Fuck. The ending was whoa. I loved this so much! It was simply amazing!
Littlebug21 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
So dark and yet I see nothing but beauty.
anonymous7684 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
! ! -has no words- ! love it.
kamimimi chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
*Humming the tune of "the servant of evil"*
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